Fly

Fly

A Poem by Alex Wong

Would you like to fly with me?

Fly high as the stars in the sky.

To come and fly with me,

Would mean that you are free.

 

Chorus:-

So come and soar,

Away with me.

Come spread your wings

And fly.

 

Your worries will melt away,

As you fly above the clouds,

With the shining moon on your wing,

And the stars that reflect in your eyes.

 

Chorus

 

No scars, no pain,

No storms, no rain.

No fears exist,

As you’re flying free

Free with me,

Today.

 

Chorus

 

© 2011 Alex Wong


Author's Note

Alex Wong
As you can see, this was meant to be a song. I never finished the tune, but I'd like to know what you think of the actual lyrics. Thanks.

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I think this song is great (because the eagle is one of my favorite animals, among other reasons.) Also, when I was 11 years old, I actually flew a plane myself, in real life. (About three hundred feet off the ground, occasionally razing farmhouses). So when it comes to the sensation of flight, I know exactly how it feels--the freedom is majestic. [I like the cover photo for this piece, too]

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Your worries will melt away,
As you fly above the clouds,
With the shining moon on your wing,
And the stars that reflect in your eyes.

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good lines dear. the lines are giving more energy to us. with wishes.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The lyrics are absolutely beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think this song is great (because the eagle is one of my favorite animals, among other reasons.) Also, when I was 11 years old, I actually flew a plane myself, in real life. (About three hundred feet off the ground, occasionally razing farmhouses). So when it comes to the sensation of flight, I know exactly how it feels--the freedom is majestic. [I like the cover photo for this piece, too]

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really nice. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is amazing. I love it. Do you sing?

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on October 11, 2011
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Alex Wong
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A Poem by Alex Wong