Secret Drug

Be the purest ray of light,

In this dark, dark world.

Where they tear out my heart,

And shatter my soul.

 

Be the one I want.

Be the one I yearn.

Be my secret drug.

Be my only addiction.

 

Be my needed release,

In these desperate times.

Save me from my disturbed mind,

My twisted unrelenting self.

 

Needing to be needed.

Wanting to be wanted.

As defenceless as I am,

Crying my tears of blood.

Author's Note

I wrote this quite a while ago. I got writers block on the last two lines. It annoyed so much that after about a month of hair pulling, I just put anything I could think of, So I don't actually like them. I may redo it sometime. So bearing that in mind. Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[JCP]

I liked it alot. Made me immediately think of one of two things. One, sex with a stranger after someone close to you has passed. Two, cheating and feeling bad while you are doing it cause you don't have the balls to admit you are unhappy with where you are in your life. Keep up the good work!

[Sourav]

It's nice... you've expressed your emotion and that's good enough.

[MOON]

It flows quite well, evokes powerful emotions.

[Revery]

Very nice, I read it with empathy and hear the passion in every dimention of this type of want.

[SwEet PeA]

UK sister! crying tears of blood. Being in that dark place...under the surface, when things aren't so good. bubbling up. We have this dance. loving too much.Ahhhh
Too many thoughts at once.

powerful

[wijdan]

i liked it

[WhiteWillow]

I think its perfect the way it is. A beautiful write.

[Kaylor Mason]

I think this one is really good. The font type and gentle script, as well as its muted red, speak of passions barely contained, and it describes how love is a drug with no equal in this world. Nice work

[J Todd Underhill]

I like the piece I am not sure you should change it, but that is your choice, I thought it read very well!