Flying

Flying

A Poem by November Gold
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A poem written when my grandfather passed away

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I think of how you must be flying
being reborn, not dying.
Strong and vibrant once more,
no longer weak, nor tired and sore.
You've made peace with this place,
with dignity and so much grace.
God heard your pleas as you dropped to your knees,
and he felt your pain as you begged, "Oh Lord please!"
All is well now and the pain will subside,
our hearts will heal and our eyes will dry.
Forever a part of each of us
You will never be gone
In our hearts and our minds
You will always live on.
Flying;
Being reborn
Not Dying.

© 2011 November Gold


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A positive way to look at the death of your Grandfather. I like the kind emotion and your desire in the poem. I hope the same for my elders who were kind to me. Thank you for the hopeful and beautiful poem. I hope your Grandfather have found a good place to land.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is a great tribute to your grandfather may he rest in peace

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

W.O.W....Can It be spelled this way?

What an amazing write you have penned and shared.
And I thank you for that, hugs, AnnaMaria

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's a remarkable discovery of self. I'm sure he's having a smile.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is so right on.. Reborn..not dying.. This is a beautiful tribute to your Grandfather and the love you shared...x

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

An inspiring tribute. I'm sure he's smiling down on you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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November Gold
November Gold

Green Bay, WI



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