Walking

Walking

A Poem by Numb

Walking

She keeps up her pace

While holding her head

High and standing tall

 

Walking

Listening for Him

Only to hear his

Heart beating for Her

 

Walking

Wishing for a new Life

And that she would not

Remember what He did

 

Walking

In her bare feet on

A path of silver light

That leads to nowhere

 

Walking

Towards that place where

She will maybe be at peace

She’ll be free of Him

 

Walking

To that last place where

She can finally be happy

Her cares will be gone

 

Walking

Toward that bright light

Not regretting a thing

That She said to Him

 

Walking

All alone as He forgets

She even existed and that

He is the reason that She

 

Walked

 

© 2010 Numb


Author's Note

Numb
And for those who are wondering, He refers to her ex... Not God, or anything... Just wanted to clear that up, so that there'd be no confusion.
~N~

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J.M
Beautiful and refreshing. Its nice to see that she walks away and is free from him. I truly loved the ending
'All alone as He forgets
She even existed and that
He is the reason that She

Walked'
And the way it is walking all through the poem as if she still misses him, and at the end she 'walked like she's moved on and forgotten him. Nice work!


Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautifully written! It shows this girl was pushed to the edge and finally walks... It also shows (in the first verse) that she's hoping he'd still want her... Desperately, was shown. Really I love it! She's not really running away from him, just walking away with no regrets! Amazing job! ^.^
Favorite lines:
"To that last place where
She will maybe at peace,
She'll be free of him"
Amazing, escaping peacefully!

"Walking
...
Not regreting a thing
She said to him"
No regrets, no sorrow, just leaves happily, fantastic job!
:D

Posted 13 Years Ago



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