LET ME IN

Wishing to leave this world and enter in to the next.

LET ME IN

When will all the sadness end?

I have lost my dearest friend.

Life is difficult at best...

Every day is such a test.

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Please dear Father take me home.

Where I'll worship at Your throne.

I've not been the steward's best...

But I'm ready for a rest.

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You have given all for me,

Yet I'm ready to be free

From a world so filled with sin.

Please dear Father...Let me in!

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Reviews

[Neville]

Sadly, this is achingly good Miss Sharon .. and I hope it gets the air time it so very much deserves .. and my word, besides the unmistakable message that underpins those perfectly pitched & poemed words, the aesthetics are something else too .. Neville

[Miss Sharon]

What an awesome review of this write! Thank you ever so much for touching my heart today. ~Sharon

[lightsong]

my dear... You've touched me in my heart and made my tears flow. when someone is facing something unbearable, they alone know the burden.... it's not about losing faith or being weak. it is about the need to rest, to be at peace. much harder... when the world everyday is becoming more uglier.

I wish You a heart filled with peace and lights, may You never feel loneliness, may Angels keep their company with You and touch You with tenderness and grace 🤍

[Ken Simm.]

I certainly empathise and agree here for the most part my friend. sadly but well written.

[Miss Sharon]

Thanks Ken for your kind response to this write. ~Sharon

[andrew mitchell]

A well written write , so much suffering today while man concentrates on more weapons of destruction. You have to question a lot of things as the scars of man add up.

[Miss Sharon]

(You have to question a lot of things as the scars of man add up.) Indeed we do Andrew. Thanks for your kind response. ~Sharon

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow Sister you see the great spirit I wanted to read something different aii my life I've asked God to exist and with that a prayer to please be with me, I'm 62 years old and I'm still waiting for an answer, my favorite song is, I Only Image what it will be when I'm in your presents. Will I speak or stand in awe. Nice touch for those of us in doubt
Thank you for sharing.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you for an awesome and understanding response to this write. I believe the longer we live and see so much suffering and unanswered prayers, perhaps we begin to question things we've always been taught to believe. ~Sharon

[Mauricio Montoya]

I still wonder if God exist because in our history we've have taken nation in the name of God for 15 thousand years poor even in there quest for victory the poor lady dead but your write please let us in
Thank you for sharing

[Einstein Noodle]

oh i do hear you Ms. Sharon ... the more one honestly knows one's self the more we recognize our need for God's forgiveness and the be made clean as only God can do ... but we are given the day .. we have work to do yet ... we never know what blessing the smallest act of kindness can be ... i feel you dear friend .. in this sensitive empathetic poem ... it brings me to my knees
E.

[Miss Sharon]

My sweet friend...your words have blessed and comforted me today. This is one of the reasons I choose to remain at this site. There are MANY very good people like you here! ~Sharon

[Einstein Noodle]

back at ya Sharon