Let It Go

Let It Go

A Poem by Endless Rain

Free stylin like it's illegal
Free flyin like an eagle
Too much I have to say
Do you care anyway?
Number 1 on the charts
You're number one for crushing hearts
Do you care anyway?
Look I can rap all day long
Look I can hate you in this song
But I've let go of all this hate
Getting rid of the heartache it can create
Do you care anyway?
Blow me off like a sawed off shotgun
I'm telling you that I am done
In the end I don't deserve this treatment
Do you care anyway?
Like a finger print engraved in cement
It's permanently done
 

© 2008 Endless Rain


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Posted 1 Year Ago


Free stylin like it's illegal
Free flyin like an eagle
Too much I have to say
Do you care anyway?
Number 1 on the charts
You're number one for crushing hearts

These lines are just amazing, like this write alot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


very beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like the strong emotion, the rhythm and the way each line delivered a powerful blow.
The imagery was great and the message was very thought-provoking.

Excellent write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"You're number one for crushing hearts
Look I can hate you in this song
But I've let go of all this hate
Getting rid of the heartache it can create"

were my favorite lines in this poem and i loved this poem and it speaks to me! I love dit a lot!! Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this very well written and well expressed with emotion

Look I can rap all day long
Look I can hate you in this song
But I've let go of all this hate
Getting rid of the heartache it can create
Do you care anyway?

Love these lines.....KIm

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Whoa, love this piece! Filled with emotion, anger and such hate!

"Do you care anyway?
Number 1 on the charts
You're number one for crushing hearts
Do you care anyway?"

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I liked it!
especially the last two lines
zA~

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

awesome!!:) the writing is clever and I'd love to hear it with a beat:)

-Sincerely,
Heather:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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I loved it
awesome

i love these lines:
"Number 1 on the charts
You're number one for crushing hearts"

and

"Blow me off like a sawed off shotgun
I'm telling you that I am done"


Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Endless Rain
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