Evermore Endearment‏

Evermore Endearment‏

A Poem by Paloma
"

love, moonglow and air castles

"

I love you without surmising the

whys and wherefores 'neath dusky

passion setting upon mere distance

betwixt & 'midst quartz glass spaces,

where scented phases astir moonglow 

and adoration's' blazing connections

madly erupt above obscure air castles,

swept away beyond briny rendezvous 

of darkly essential crystallized marrow,

like wildflowers penchant for Spring

blooming 'tween fiery summoned March,

snowdrifts dashing bout ignitable flurries

amongst wind's orgasmic undressing,

farthermost indulgent sundown reasons

regaling its worth with naught but those

magnificent moments in timely conception,

whence endearment yearns to be evermore

© 2016 Paloma


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"...air castles" ..love that ... instantly sparks my imagination! man do i applaud your use of nature in this ..every line explodes anew ...personifications consistent all the way through ... read it again just to savor ..nice one my friend ...have not read such a sunset in such a way before .. :))
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paloma

3 Years Ago

I'm thrilled by your review, thanks so much! :)



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yes, just love...don't overthink it because if we try to figure out the why and wherefores we overanalyze....and analyze ourselves right out of the feeling...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paloma

3 Years Ago

Yes, exactly that. Thank you Jacob.
Gorgeous wording and light to this beauty of a write:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paloma

3 Years Ago

Thanks Pryde. :)
A magically romantic write...reminiscent of another romantic poet who used to frequent our halls at WC. A pleasure to read this....like a fantasy that takes me away. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paloma

3 Years Ago

Thanks Lydi, I appreciate your time and glad it took you away.
"...air castles" ..love that ... instantly sparks my imagination! man do i applaud your use of nature in this ..every line explodes anew ...personifications consistent all the way through ... read it again just to savor ..nice one my friend ...have not read such a sunset in such a way before .. :))
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Paloma

3 Years Ago

I'm thrilled by your review, thanks so much! :)

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Added on September 8, 2016
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