Wet your whistle

Wet your whistle

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Singing love songs ... bathing in the rain....

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Red-shafted and Yellow-Shafted Flickers 
love gentle water movement 
They wear a gorgeous coat feathered in black and gold 
as if dressed for the opera 
Hummingbirds dip, dive, dance and frolic 
like crazy when they bathe 
They drink nectar up to eight times their  weight  
and love a light mist. 
Their bodies glow like sparkling rainbows... 
Wet your whistle and and love a thistle 

© 2014 Patricia Wedel


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A poem to hug and learn, Pat. I love to read your poems, learn about your visitors. Seems you welcome birds and insects I've never heard of, dear lady. As your next reviewer says, you really are an educator. I would add, if may, that you make learning so enjoyable!!! 'Hummingbirds dip, dive, dance and frolic ' Such a super sweet phrase

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Months Ago

dear Emma... on a day when golden rays peek over the trees... I feel a breeze of wonderment. The sa.. read more



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Oh, that is juat beautiful. I love the entire poem. I must say it is one of the best poems I have read on writer's café. My favourite lines would be
"They wear a gorgeous coat feathered in black and gold
 as if dressed for the opera "
In my library! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Patricia Wedel

9 Years Ago

dear Moon daughter, My heart is happy
to read your review of "Wet your whistle".
Your.. read more
your poetry's so special and a balm to the heart. glorifying nature and God's creatures!!
I've never seen a humming bird but in pictures or on TV. I wish we had them in Tunisia. such a marvel of nature!
I wonder what they taste like.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Patricia Wedel

9 Years Ago

dear Woody, thank you for reading my
poem. Humming birds are a marvel
with so much be.. read more
A beautiful poem to read on a summer morning...lovely hummingbirds glowing like sparkling rainbows. Breathtaking and beautiful my dear friend. It is always a delight to read your poetry!

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

9 Years Ago

dear Julie... You review is like a
gentle summer mist.... falling like
kisses on thirs.. read more
Your images are luverly and picturesque, the hummingbirds are a sight of magnificence, your pen does them justice Pat....sweet for a Sunday morn'!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

9 Years Ago

dear Frieda... Your review is a
delightful splash of cooling water
on a hot summer mor.. read more
Yes indeed Patricia, you have captured the intrinsic enigma of the beautiful hummingbird so picturesquely and imaginatively words fail me..... Exquisite indeed!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

9 Years Ago

dear Tom... your review is like a
million stars to wish upon.
May your day be filled .. read more
Dear friend,

I've missed reading your gorgeous poetry, about nature, flowers, and all your eyes catch... I wished the hummingbird, lived at my continent, and your former continent... such a powerful and seasoned poem, full of love for nature. Thank you Pat, Hugs,

- Elisa

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you dear, the sun is shining and it is pretty warm weather... Much love to you and yours, and .. read more
Patricia Wedel

9 Years Ago

dear Elisa... Hungary has the Blue Danube River
and would be blessed with the gorgeous Hummin.. read more
Patricia Wedel

9 Years Ago

Lovely to be friends with a poet
from my heart land. truly... Pat
What a beautiful message you employ using these marvelous creatures. There is movement, sparkle and life if we care to stop and look carefully. There is an underlying beauty to them all...Excellent...:)..............

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

9 Years Ago

dear Sami... The energy of the hummingbird is an
Inspiration which tugs at my heart and soul... read more
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Wow. You are welcome...:).................
and they are the only living thing that can fly in place...although humans seem to try to do it a lot...
i like how this poem tells me to appreciate what i have...to move my wings to the music and realized where i am is really okay.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

9 Years Ago

Dear Jacob... As long as we can hear
the birds sing and the bees can pollinate...
we c.. read more
Hummingbirds...captivating little creatures, aren't they? The imagery you employ is so lovely and there is a bit of whimsy in your words. Truly, your mind is a poetic playground, Pat. So happy I found this as you posted it! Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

9 Years Ago

Dear Lydi... there is whimsey in birdsong...
and our yard is a poetic playground as
bi.. read more

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Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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