Your Iconic Valentine

She speaks like Thunder and sings like Rain... 

There is Lightening in her Smile and a 

Rainbow in her Eyes... 

Whenever the Wind passes through her Hair 

the Flowers bloom without a Care... 

She herself is vulnerable to the Whispers of 

Persuasion as Mischief of a Wink becomes an aphrodisiac... 

Reviews

[Lorry]

That sounded like the opening for a piece that you could have easily called Lorrys sunday, without the afro-dizzy-act! 😊
But thank you for reminding me i have to go spend my ten pounds (her idea, not mine. She says it makes you try harder and i just got her to put it up from five pounds, which she agreed to because she saw a book i wanted for £8. And dont worry, she spends exactly 10 pounds so im expecting a bag of penny sweets too (which thanks to cost of living are now 5p each... For a penny sweetie? The world has gone mad.
It may be a well timed reminder this year, with wars spreading over the map, to let love win, for a day at least.
And i hope if cupids arrows fall, it isnt as painful as it sounds and heals well from the intrusion! 😊

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lorry… the Sun is shining on Valentines and Birds are arriving to Dine,.. Sweethearts and Tarts entwine with Berry 🍷 Happy Valentines… 💘 Pat

[Poetic Beauty]

This is an amazing poem written with comparison between nature and her beauty. I love that she has a mischievous side and is distracted by its wink

Ah I see this is the second time I have read this. I’m glad I did.

[Amy R]

Definitely an iconic Valentine...

My fav lines "She herself is vulnerable to the Whispers of

Persuasion as Mischief of a Wink becomes an aphrodisiac... "

What a lovely poem. 💜💜
-Amy

[Sami Khalil]

Iconic and poetic. Sure to strengthen the vulnerable.

[emmajoygreen]

There is a combination of daring and wistfulness in your Valentine poem, dear Pat. Especially smiled and nodded at -

'She herself is vulnerable to the Whispers of
Persuasion as Mischief of a Wink becomes an aphrodisiac... '

You have a wise perspective of Woman when she needs show both femininity AND determination !

(Sorry to have missed this great poem on the day, Pat.)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Ideally iconic valentine write. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing!

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sky… lovely to read your review. ❤️ Love is a feathery feeling that leaves us like the Song 🎶 “Jupiter in her Hair “ by the Artist Train.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

So true Pat. Love is awesome!

[Sami Khalil]

Gorgeous! Written with class and true persuasion. You are an iconic writer with the right tonic.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami… when Cardinals and Valentines appear while Snow is falling in February… We hold Lovers in our Dreams… thank you for a Charming Review… softly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Keep us charmed and wanting more. You are welcome Patricia Wedel.

[Soren]

A beautiful portrayal and use of imagery painting the capriciousness of mother nature, my true love. Beautifully worded and well organized.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Soren… Red Cardinals and ❤️ Hearts become a Valentine Cliche … you have gathered the Petals of Sweetheart 🌹 Roses to keep in a Music 🎶 Box of Romantic Persuasions. softly, Pat

[JessyJacob]

she walks in rain getting wet with polythene

he offers her life umbrella in his office for a bio

she gets hold of his office as if hugging him to get oily

he watches her hidingly while working

she comes for him early and leaves late to feel his presence

she doesnt pay attention but she knows she is in his hands hugging him

as she manages both work and romance with him, 

he thinks she is not even thinking of him though. 

Happy Valentines .....

[JessyJacob]

Hi pat, you didnt reoly to my above message, you dont even want tl widh me??

[JessyJacob]

Wish* .

[Patricia Wedel]

Wishing you a 💜 Heart of perfect Peace … Amen

[JessyJacob]

Thank you ❤️🩷

[JessyJacob]

why do you want to confuse me call coommmeeee, throw every s**t you eat from, no sir, better bee where you areeee.

[JessyJacob]

i left him a gift at his own desk

but left without even looking at it

it stays there till he touches and eats or being thrown in trash

by people as they think it is expired

but no one knows how much that heart spent on getting for him

a life struggle, eons time of love adored to him.

a sacrifice no one cared for.

a blessing for him though he fucked her out for other.

not a coward she needed.

she is like Laila who got buried in bricks alive for expressing her love,

not a cunning woman who waited for people hitting bucket.

[JessyJacob]

there is lot of difference between, who thinks people to die and who thinks makes wishes true with waiting. i know, this is still 21 st century. a decade difference doesnt change your attitude when your own sibling is better than you though younger to you. it is just cunningness not a westernisation or catholism. It is Christianity, rewriting it, a holy spirit who really cares for.

[Patricia Wedel]

I understand the World and Spirituality to a degree… always learning…

[JessyJacob]

nice to know you are learning.

[Pete]

wow. brilliant. certainly "iconic. she's really something. sounds like she could be the mother of nature. a box of chocolates are good too ... :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Pete…. The very early morning of Valentines … sleepy eyes reading your Review of a Valentine Moon that I actually viewed during the Night … wishing you 💜 a Heart of perfect Peace and ❤️ Love. gently, Pat