Your Iconic Valentine

She speaks like Thunder and sings like Rain... 

There is Lightening in her Smile and a 

Rainbow in her Eyes... 

Whenever the Wind passes through her Hair 

the Flowers bloom without a Care... 

She herself is vulnerable to the Whispers of 

Persuasion as Mischief of a Wink becomes an aphrodisiac... 

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

There is a combination of daring and wistfulness in your Valentine poem, dear Pat. Especially smiled and nodded at -

'She herself is vulnerable to the Whispers of
Persuasion as Mischief of a Wink becomes an aphrodisiac... '

You have a wise perspective of Woman when she needs show both femininity AND determination !

(Sorry to have missed this great poem on the day, Pat.)

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Em... let us begin the Beguine as Romance is discovered among the Ripples of Anticipation... and the Treasure of a Pearl. softly, Pat

[Lorry]

That sounded like the opening for a piece that you could have easily called Lorrys sunday, without the afro-dizzy-act! 😊
But thank you for reminding me i have to go spend my ten pounds (her idea, not mine. She says it makes you try harder and i just got her to put it up from five pounds, which she agreed to because she saw a book i wanted for £8. And dont worry, she spends exactly 10 pounds so im expecting a bag of penny sweets too (which thanks to cost of living are now 5p each... For a penny sweetie? The world has gone mad.
It may be a well timed reminder this year, with wars spreading over the map, to let love win, for a day at least.
And i hope if cupids arrows fall, it isnt as painful as it sounds and heals well from the intrusion! 😊

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lorry… the Sun is shining on Valentines and Birds are arriving to Dine,.. Sweethearts and Tarts entwine with Berry 🍷 Happy Valentines… 💘 Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

I really like the line “ whispers of persuasion…’.. very sensual indeed , and appropriate for Valentines Day, yet all of these soft , vivid images, are equally appropriate and are typically yours……your “wild “ woman has much lightening in her character, especially her smile…..
Warmly, B

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Betty… my Hungarian Ancestors have given me the Art of Romantic Roses where Petals fall upon the Storms of Passions Symphonies with a Burst of Cymbals when ❤️ Hearts Collide… dear Valentine… Adventure Arrives…. tenderly, Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very Welcome dear Pat, Happy Valentine
with romantic overtones....
Warmly, B

[Neville]

this is very special Pat .. and is now quite possibly my very favouwritest of your posts to date ma'am .. Neville

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Neville… thou Art 🖼️ a Lover of Passion when Cupid 💘 arrives and Kisses awake the Embers of Desire. tenderly, Pat

[Dave Brown]

Cupid may look a bit off in his white diapers, however his heart couldn't be more perfectly positioned

[Patricia Wedel]

Hot and bothered when Valentines become a Lovers Brothel of Butterflies 🦋… secretly, Pat

[Poetic Beauty]

This reminds me a gypsy wild and carefree without thought to what others think. I can picture a woman running through a field of wildflower away from the city. Enjoying the sun; as someone special watches in aww and gives a simple wink in acknowledgment

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Beauty... the gremlins messed with my recent response.. so here is another thank you for your charming Review. My Father's family were Hungarian Gypsies and I admire their Romantic ways of expressing their Passion. Golden Rings and dancing in the Buttercups in Spring. gently, Pat

[Poetic Beauty]

Sounds amazing to me

[andrew mitchell]

Nicely said Pat with a touch of Valentine magic

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Andrew… Valentine Magic is syncopated Jazz … may you dodge the Arrows of Cupid’s Bow until the Show begins the Beguine… softly, Pat

[Anita Frader]

I absolutely LOVE those last two lines.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Anita… a Romantic Lover can take you to the Moon and back… I appreciate your in depth Review of a Rendezvous… softly, Pat

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful and full of passion and desire.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Thomas... "the Sun will come out tomorrow ... Bet your bottom dollar" (from the Movie ANNIE...
Lovely to read your passionate Review. softly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lovers... Cupid is everywhere... and Hearts become vulnerable...
the Author, Pat