Ocean Waves of Lost Love

Ocean Waves of Lost Love

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

Should Order 88 be the decree, 

Recalling thee, my fear by love is met. 

Such is the pow'r that thou hast over me, 

Thy kindness doth my troubled mind offset.  

Love shines throughout the stars with mighty ray, 

Love lands, with eagle's claws, upon the heart, 

Love, like a blaster shot, doth fire convey, 

Love is a sculpted, finely crafted art. 

To fond Jakku we'll go, with desert sheen, 

No more shall we by enemies be press'd.  

We are join'd fast no one can come between, 

Our bond would fly in any pilot's test.  

No vast StarKillerBase shall I e'er fear, 

E'er unto thee my spirit shall adhere.  

           

© 2019 Patricia Wedel


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i like the old time feel of this poem...reads like one of the classics...has that tone, the perfect rhyme scheme including in-line rhyming..
and the old English...."e'er i shan't fail the pilot's test if i ever found a co-pilot who would write something like this to me.
j.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

8 Months Ago

dear Jacob✈️... you are a scholar and a gentleman... touché. It seemed to suit my fancy. Than.. read more



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Not having been in a close relationship for a couple decades, I rarely miss it, since so often the chaos outweighed any bliss I ever got from connecting with others intimately. But your poem made me miss one thing that happens when two people get that close . . . the way one stands up for the other in all things . . . having an advocate, someone to help fight the onslaught of life, but also, someone to help us see when we need to bare our eagle claws. Love how you convey a sense of love doing battle, fighting off all the obstacles of life (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Months Ago

dearest Margie... you must have a seventh sense of perception to discover this "dusty" poem sitting .. read more
Your Jedi words skills complete they are
powerful... the force is... in you
mind what you have learned.
save you it can:)
Love this poem I do
for clever... it is:)
He he he

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Months Ago

dearest Robert... I missed seeing this amazing review.
To blend Jedi force to the Bard Shak.. read more
Loved this write, Pat. This was great piece of poetry. May the force be with you:)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Patricia Wedel

8 Months Ago

dear Pryde... a lovely review to grow into... May the season of Thanksgiving find you warm and love.. read more
Pryde Foltz

8 Months Ago

Happy Thanksgiving, Pat:)
This reads like a sonnet from the Bard himself Pat. Your descriptions of love are wonderful but love lands like eagle's claws upon the heart, I felt and smiled at. You carried me along with the drumbeat and I thoroughly enjoyed the journey dear Pat.

Chris

Posted 8 Months Ago


Old time language.....classic! I liked the rhyming in this one, Pat. We all need a good co-pilot in life, don't we? Those who have found one are truly blessed. Another lovely poem, my friend. Lydi**

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

8 Months Ago

Thank you Lydi for reading a Shakespearean sample of the Bard’s style. It does seem to be a moder.. read more
Wonderful use of language dear Pat. I wish our world would seek peace, love and kindness, I enjoyed your flow of thoughts. Meaningful and worthwhile words shared.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

8 Months Ago

dearest John... thank you for wishing that our world be peaceful and kind with a love 💕 that bind.. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

A beautiful poem dear Pat.
There is such a passionate path of thought that carries us over the waves... over the stars... out to the deepest deserts waiting on love... in the longing... Powerful movement of magic.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

8 Months Ago

dear 🦉 Owl... so pleased to share this Shakespearean rhapsody with you. I was blessed to find Sh.. read more
' Love shines throughout the stars with mighty ray, ~ Love lands, with eagle's claws, upon the heart, '

This is one of the most beautiful pieces of writing i've read in all my years in the cafe, Pat. Not only because it's written with such care for language, but emotions jump from the monitor and i feel.. so much.

Posted 8 Months Ago


emmajoy

8 Months Ago

Convent-school held that young girls should be fully aware of the Bard's sonnets. At the time we di.. read more
Patricia Wedel

8 Months Ago

dear Em... the Arts we learn in private school live within our heart... the tenderness and elegance .. read more
emmajoy

8 Months Ago

You speak poetry.. it's wonderful! :)
Lovely, simply lovely.

Love is a many miraculous thing, but it has its pains well.
That is why this is my favorite part

Love shines throughout the stars with mighty ray,

Love lands, with eagle's claws, upon the heart,

Love, like a blaster shot, doth fire convey,

Love is a sculpted, finely crafted art.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

8 Months Ago

dear Dale... thank you for stopping by to share your feelings. I inadvertently came across the site.. read more
What we have here is Star Wars and iambic pentameter. The Bard might have written this one as a review. Very romantic, very nicely rhymed.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

8 Months Ago

dear John... I am studying a Sonnet... most of the words were in a form that I mentioned as a first .. read more

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Mother of Robert and Edie Marie... Grandmother of Ethan age 16 and Madeline age 12; also Shannah age 7 and sister Kahless age 5; Married to Roger, a man of Letters, retired. Living in Fredericksbu.. more..

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