Winter Creme De Violette

Winter Creme De Violette

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

Your kisses are sweet Vermouth 

and garnished with lime... 

I am your shy Violet sipping Brandy 

by a warm passionate fire... 

A painted Bunting attracted to your 

soft feathered Wing-span 

protecting my Virtue... 

A hummingbird lingers on the nightstand 

watching old silent movies on demand.  

I hold your feathered hand ...   

dreaming of Waterlillies blue until 

the morning Sun rises in colors of 

Lavender Blue and being with You... 
 

© 2020 Patricia Wedel


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' A hummingbird lingers on the nightstand .. .. watching old silent movies on demand. ' Love the addition of how to feel your words.. a brief step left or right then.. returning to theme. Sweet and charming acknowledgement to yet more of your world, Pat.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Em... I enjoyed your review of my world in
shades of colors and painted buntings wit.. read more
emmajoy

3 Years Ago

My pleasure, Pat. Tis good to exchange as ever always.



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If only we could remember to see the glory of nature within those we spend time with, we might be more reverent, as your poem sounds toward the object of this narrator's affection. Many times we misguided humans are focused on the human frailties of another. Reading your poem is the first time I thought about seeing the natural beauty of a person, the feathers, the fluttering, the fun . . . as a way to appreciate people by putting away our judgments, putting away our critical nature. This poem shows us how to fully & enthusiastically accept another by focusing on his/her beautiful natural qualities (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Margie... lovely to hear your voice as you sing 🎶 in acapella chords of Nature’s Orches.. read more
barleygirl

3 Years Ago

You are in rare poetic form, this holiday season! We need that becuz so many are feeling jaded (like.. read more
Perfect descriptions, most excellent sights, sounds and colors. You bring us deeper into the experiences and sensations. Always a treat when reading your lovely and mesmerizing poems.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Beautiful use of words. Dear Pat, the words danced to perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest John... so charming to read your endearing review... I had a premonition that you would find.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Hello dear Pat and you are welcome.


......... and who would not want to be that hummingbird guardian of yours, gazing down upon thee, through deep slumber till the shallows of dawn ................... x

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

Whoa... I am ready for a fanciful snowfall where
the subtle call of a Whippoorwill will be t.. read more
Pat, this a collage painting of magnificent colors, warm feelings, a bit of romance and passion combined with our world fine feathered friends;
It flows like a dream, what more can I say, but just perfect! As always, Betty


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Betty... it seems that dreams can soothe our
worries and give us a different view o.. read more
Betty Hermelee

3 Years Ago

You are just full of beautiful words, I really love all your metaphors and vivid images that catch m.. read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

Hi Betty... now that I am an Antique by years of a veneer that defies the sky of possibilities— I .. read more
Thanks Pat, I never knew you cared 🤗
Those eyes do work so wel in synch with your pen and always remind me of the old writing forums on MySpace that used to have photo challenges where all were welcome to right what they wish about the photo of the week.
I can't be the only one who misses MySpace for that, as well as its success at dealing with bots and trols.
I only mention this as your words always capture the essence and more from your images used and expand the story beyond the frame. Lime, Brandy, fire, feathers, waterlilies and lavender mentions fill the page with scents and a knowing comfort. only ever matched by the memory of my Gran and mum's home baking and the wondrous smell of my Granda"s pipe.
These are the mental happy places I go to when I need to relax and smile.
And even on its own, I love the colour splash of your photos that somehow drift and linger through your words.


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Lorry... not quite three am in Virginia on the East Coast and I awoke and after fluttering a.. read more
Very beautiful and the hummingbird...yeah that was a brilliant line and they are my favorite of all Gods creatures. Just lovely

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

Thank you Patricia... so special that we have the same name... we were blessed.
May your da.. read more
So very romantic and filled with rich imagery. Your love of birds comes through in this one too. You must be getting ready for Valentine's Day! :) Very good write, Pat. It is lyrical! Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Lydi... I am twitterpatted that my poetry could be Lyrical... 🎶 musical notes of passiona.. read more
Dear Pat your poetic expression is a paint palette of wonder. I see you and Roger in your winter days. Beautiful birds, vibrant colours and water lilies. Even in winter there is something to be hopeful for and for us to count our blessings. I hold your feathered hand.... dreaming. We must hang on to our dreams. Sending love across the waves.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Chris.. I was enchanted by your review... you inspired me a day or so ago and I waited for .. read more
dreaming of being with you...yes, that is what we do these days...we dream, imagine,
think of what if's...because life is about distance now...
hands almost held, hugs almost felt,
love in isolation.
this is a beautiful poem...hopeful..
I used to have set of birds that were kits to paint...The Bunting was the first one I did.
j.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dearest Jacob... it seems you have always been Artistic with colors to enhance your world. Painted .. read more

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Added on November 21, 2020
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Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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