Taking Chances

Taking Chances

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

Easy on the Eyes... Creating my Demise...  

I stopped for awhile... He smiled and winked  

His Baby Blues and I knew I would be in His Arms 

before the Sun Set ... knowing that it was written 

in the Stars our lives would be entwined for  

many many Moons... 

© 2022 Patricia Wedel


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My hubby has baby blues. Lol, they'll get you every time! Funny, my eyes are different colors, one's blue green and the other is a light brown with a hint of hazel in it, and yet my son's eyes are dark brown. My mom had green eyes and my dad had brown, so I guess it's a mutation of both.

Does your husband read your poetry, and know it was written for him? What a pleasure that must be!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear Kelly… I remember you sharing your unusual combination of your eyes… it seems to rhyme with.. read more



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This was a beautiful poem that gave me good vibe and created a lovely romantic scene in my head!

The only criticism I could give might not even be criticism, if it is a style choice.

I wonder why you capitalized lots of words in the poem that weren't at the start of the line, such as ''His Arms' and 'Creating my Demise'.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

I suppose that is my style when Life becomes a Dip in the Ocean of Dreams..
Thanks for your .. read more
I believe in love at first sight
If it feels right it is right instinct tells us a lot
Good write ✍️

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear Julie… Instinct is pretty strong… but we must be Cautions; however it usually gives us a S.. read more
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

1 Year Ago

Yes true
I believe so
Love at first sight. It can happen. Perhaps it is written in the stars... sometimes!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

Thanks Robert for your Advice. Love can be a Merry Go Round … I chose to go for the Tiger. tende.. read more
What a gorgeous romantic write Pat. And written in the stars too. A little trip down memory lane here I think, and why not. Like a moonlight serenade. Sending love across the pond.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

Whoa… Shazam… a Circus Rodeo… a Ride of Emotions… a Tiger roars… a good nights sleep and I.. read more
mmmmmmmm so serenely, romantically delightful .. i love this one ma'am .. sets me heart to beatin' again .. love and great peace and joy to you young lady .. you and yours!
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest Gene… sometimes we just like to be softly touched like flowers in the Wind.. knowing that .. read more
.... and the moons keep on coming Patricia... it was a good chance to take I'd say... and nicely written

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear Curt…. It takes patience to wait for Fate
to appear and we take a Chance to dance be.. read more
Good morning Pat,
Your lovely ~ sweet poem made me smile...
Ye, knowing it was written in the stars... great line..
Lisa, early morning in Spain

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dearest Lisa in Spain… your Review is a Gift today… just yesterday I gathered pale pink and whit.. read more
Lisasview

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome dear Pat..and what a lovely thing to say that my review is a gift to you,,
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Ah, the perfect tryst, timed exactly before the sun was to set. Baby blue eyes are a magnet, who wouldn't want this romance to bloom ? and the stars were pretty sure of this blossoming relationship.
Well done Pat.
Truly
B.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Betty… my Roger has soft Blue Eyes… so it is natural to be poetic … thanks for referr.. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

Lucky you! And you’re welcome dear Pat
Truly
B.
and they have been, I feel...and that has been a comforting thing.
Nicely done, Pat.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Thanks Jacob for your 💜 heart print… June Moon is an Omen of Romantic encounters .., gently, Pa.. read more
The June Moon has cast a Spell that captivates Lovers Charm...
Even the Milky Way has become a Place for Friendly Persuasion...
tenderly, the Author, Pat

Posted 2 Years Ago



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