Gladiolas standing Tall  Part One

Gladiolas standing Tall Part One

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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We dress in Petals of Violet and Red as though we are Guardians of Silhouettes..

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We want to protect our Home and families 

of Storms and virtual Reality... as Politicians 

speak on Hallowed Ground where soldiers now 

lie in Repose to gather Poppies and Prayers... 

Our Homes are protected by Guns and Roses with 

Thorns and Triggers that kill and destroy 

our Citizens... 

What can we do to ensure that there will be 

Peace in the Valley...  Amen 

© 2023 Patricia Wedel


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My thought about your fine (as evermore) writing and its valuable comments is..

If War is the only response to problems between countries, their borders and all.. why has there been more than one?

When someone can give THE answer of all answers we really will be Human kind.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

8 Months Ago

dear Em... sorry for being late to reply... it seems that our Country has lost it's Marbles. We hav.. read more
emmajoygreen

8 Months Ago

Our poor sad world's in a state, Pat. We live in a state of shock, wondering what will come next B.. read more



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I think about this so often dear Patricia, and one thing that always seems to come to mind, (and this applies to many things) is that nobody thinks in terms of legacy anymore we are so fast-paced these days that the sound byte and meme culture has taken away the attention span of the masses and the politicians bank on it they don't seem to care much about the long term because the masses don't care about anything longer than a few hours until the next big tragedy strikes and the cycle just keeps repeating! Some clever man once said the definition of insanity is to do the same thing over and over again and expect the results to change! What if that insanity has become a part of our collective culture? If only we could make them all think in terms of legacy

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

dear Robert.. we do leave a Legacy for our Children and their Children where Heaven on Earth needs t.. read more
You are so right. People are tired of violence, senseless killings. In everything, it is how we use them. Guns can be used for protection or used for illegal crimes; a double-edged sword. I blame the user, sick in the head or evil, for abusing the right. In my opinion, it is more like or should be a privilege like owning a driver's license, a passport. I could be wrong. Lots of emotions on both sides.
You are writing with good heart and message.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

dear Sami… the Sword is a Symbol held in great esteem… The powder of Guns are necessary at time.. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Months Ago

All true and well said. Long live love , peace and just laws.
dear folks... Guns and Roses and Gladiolus will not become
the answer to saving our families ... unless we become open
to new solutions where everyone has work to do to pay their own way.
Nothing is Free to anyone... except the "lame and suffering from pain"... Amen

Posted 11 Months Ago


emmajoygreen

11 Months Ago

The Takes of Two Cities is such a wonderful metaphor for politics as a whole, Pat! Perhaps
.. read more
Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

Thank you Em… every day I see our people giving children and friends Hope for the Future. It is i.. read more
emmajoygreen

11 Months Ago

Yes, Pat.. how very true, takes only a seconds to say a sincere 'please, thank you or both to who- o.. read more
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Patricia Wedel
Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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