Mid - Flight Conclusion

Mid - Flight Conclusion

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe
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hanging on a kite's tail

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and so i caught a flight on the tail of a kite
being there was no other mode of transpo
smooth was the ride till a raindrop fell
without warning
kite stopped mid - flight

should i let go free fall
trust you to catch me
feeling heat on back of my neck
your eyes gazing up

i just know

i let go of the tail softly tumbling
clouds transparent guide me
trusting your arms to be open
waiting to catch me

© 2010 Chloe..Across the Universe


Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
a nonsense poem or maybe about blind faith ..

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A very fun and witty poem and yes it has such a great message bout life being full of opportunities but you have to take a leap of faith to reach them.

Posted 14 Years Ago


That is what loving is all about Chloe, and you captured it in the most romantic and fluffy way in this gorgeous little poem.

Have faith, is all we can do.

Smiling at you

Tai,

love to donovan

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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