Mid - Flight Conclusion

hanging on a kite's tail

and so i caught a flight on the tail of a kite
being there was no other mode of transpo
smooth was the ride till a raindrop fell
without warning
kite stopped mid - flight

should i let go free fall
trust you to catch me
feeling heat on back of my neck
your eyes gazing up

i just know

i let go of the tail softly tumbling
clouds transparent guide me
trusting your arms to be open
waiting to catch me

Author's Note

a nonsense poem or maybe about blind faith ..

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

We always hope someone will catch us when we free fall. Hard not to depend on others. Hard to fight to survive alone in this world. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tim]

I wouldn't call it nonsense at all. It's Really nice. The raindrop could be a tear. It's all about being unsure and trusting in someone to me. I liked it.

[Devons]

Smooth and charming. I love the first line, great opening! And this...

"smooth was the ride till a raindrop fell
without warning
kite stopped mid - flight "

...is a great contrast of feeling; a beautiful image crashed to a halt in an abrupt ending. Quality work..

[Michael X]

wow, awsome flow and formula that brings the messege to life, blind faith indeed, such heated images of absolutely permiate this, you are so talented

[Deep in the Woodline...]

I like it whatever it is. And yes, I think blind faith follows it nicely.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

let go... let god
sometimes we surrender to a higher power than just the wind :o)

[Gandré]

Ahh this was not nonsense at all. This was about those moments when we are insecure, when we are not sure if we should open ourselves when we start to love.. and then we just need to wait a bit, it will solve itself. Empedocles, with his guiding principles of Love is a nice lecture to read in such moments, I loved this poem. So artistic and such way to say. missed you.

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I hate when I want to fly a kite and there is not enough wind, maybe sometimes love needs more wind anyhow lovely.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Nonsense, no. I saw beauty here of a trusting love. Great Write!

[An owl on the moon]

This is whimsical and beautiful, that element of trust only truly being proven when we let go. I love the feelings your words unleash.