Here

Here

A Poem by Pax Analog
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Lyric to multitrack whole song in the playlist player on profile pg.; theme is Spirit 'midst the networking brouhaha.

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Several billion conversations,
sex and money through the wires
Howls of love and indignation
on this slo-mo funeral pyre
 
Here, touching when we can
only Heart can stand
as the Promised Land
Here
 
Hear the random noisy city,
lick your honey in the hive
Marvel in the flesh, cool kitty,
what it is to be Alive
 
Here. . .
 
War of words between we phantoms,
me-me-meing la-la-la
Fritter folly is for bantams,
ain’t no path to Shangri-La
 
Here. . .
 
Buzz of heightened recognition
of your face before you’re born
The Condition of conditions
of mortality is shorn
 
Here. . .
 
 

© 2008 Pax Analog


Author's Note

Pax Analog
WHOLE SONG in playlist player; 1-2 of read/listen is appreciated, and worth your while.

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Great work Pax! I think is this wonderful, no bs here. Love the voice, sound and everything!!

"Here, touching when we can
only Heart can stand
as the Promised Land
Here

Hear the random noisy city,
lick your honey in the hive
Marvel in the flesh, cool kitty,
what it is to be Alive

Here. . ."



Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Well done. The human condition. Here. Oh, but we do not recognize our oneness until we've me-me-meed ourselves to death. Literally.

A pleasure to read, thank you. Now, going to check out the music--


Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing song, deep and meaningful, holds images of modern life and yet there is more. I love the words "heightened recognition" and keep hearing these words as if they are the clue to some hidden mystery.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sweet yellow jives buzzing hymns of the everyday condition! i enjoyed this very much P!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brouhaha is a good word to describe the formidable technology that exists, here, and the impact it has had on mortality and morality.
Digital devices of terrifying power and questionable origin are the norm. The end result in human terms..... abnormal in such a fashion to be unspeakable.
Of course, I am completely insane and should not be given audience.
Excellent lyrics, Sir.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awesome writting.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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i love this..

the musicality is edible magic, I love the structure and wide usage of varied imagery. The creativity and imagination in this song like in many of your others is a beautiful collection of words to read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

life in a scale free network ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Fantastic piece of poetry! Keep up the good work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very good work hun! Keep going!

Posted 9 Years Ago


awsome is all I can say! whats happening friend? hope you are well...love your poetry! x0x0x0x

Posted 10 Years Ago



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