Nin_Amour

Anima as Au d'Anais.

elixir of anais nin

flows in your

veins l'amour

 

marrow of filigreed

fire infuses your

treasured lyric

lines of gold

 

your luscious curves

flow out from the soul

of an angel in a strange land

 

your lush scarlet lips

kiss the promise

of the rose's rise

from a prelude of frost

 

your dewy-eyed

yearning draws

this sojourner

across the wilderness

of forgotten sighs

Reviews

[cilla]

First, I can't believe I never found this poem among your writings. You've been leading a whole other secret life. To say I love this does not began to describe my feelings.

It is dreamy, ethereal and it plays like a song spinning over and over again in my head. It is as if Leonard Cohen and Jim Morrison sat down and collaborated on one perfect love song. So, yes, I love this and wonder why we don't see more of this from you?

" this sojourner across the wilderness of forgotten sighs" Words one would whisper to a lover as they shared a pillow.

Namaste ... yes, I bow to you learned master.

[Pax Analog]

That's amazing, darlin', thank you. And yes it meshes well w/your own luscious-textured work. As to why I don't express this mode more often, I have to feel it re the Goddess, & I haven't had that sensitive an interface of late. There are probably a few more nuggets here, & as well as some roses buried in thorny prose. This tender quality is also present in some of my songs. Thanks again for your wonderfully appreciative review. XOXO

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

this is wonderful as are your writings in general. what i like about pieces like these is that you have to think to understand and in the end a challenge always hits you deeper which matches them because you write looking at a great depth..... goddammit your reviews are even wonderful!

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I found this to be a beautiful and wonderful write. I enjoyed this write.

[Crowley]

My kind of siren for sure. This was beautifully written with much attention to detail. Nice job.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

enthralling and lush poetic embrace of the feminine~

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Oh Yes lovey, this one rocks - I would tht you would write more poetry. This goes in my favorites for certain. Nicely spun - evocative and ethusiastic! Nice one.
Love and Light,
SiddARTha

[Tate Morgan]

Damn that is grand I am beyond jealous I want to put my name to it
Bravo
!!

[Alicante lullaby]

wow.Beautiful sonnet.

[SM Davis]

marrow of filigreed
fire infuses your
treasured lyric
lines of gold

Muchos la admiraron para su coraje y gusto. Usted ha dado su honor en esta escritura. 100 margaritas!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

A beautiful poem and who doesn't love Anais Nin?
dewy eyed yearning.. love it Pax.
and use of French makes the poem more exotic..

Chloe

[GBU POETRY ONLY]

N.A. is a luscious, delicate and alluring piece...
It has imagery galore and a fragile sensitive feel to boot.
Loved the last two verses especially... thanks for sharing!
GBU