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A Chapter by Emily Pazienza

     A smile crossed my face as I gazed at the boy. I saw an emotion in his eyes, one that was

vaguely familiar. One that I had seen many times in my lifetime. Fear.
     I took a step forward and he took a step back, hands trembling. Even I could see that he

was completely terrified. I threw my head back and laughed a cold hard laugh. He turned and

     Giving him a minutes head start, I ran after him. In a series of seconds he was in my view.

I leaped for him as he glanced behind himself, horror on his face. He fell to the ground, my knees settled on his back. I lent forward, towards the pulse running along his neck.

"STOP!" he screamed, his eyes starting to water. 

"Stop." he repeated, this time, softly.

I smile crept on to my face.

"Why should I? Don't you know I only used you? Only kept you close to me for this moment? You mean nothing to me." I chuckled harshly, leaning farther down.

"But I don't feel the same way. Claire. I love you and you know it." he whispered, water leaking over his eyes. 

I sighed, yet I still smiling.

"Oh well." I replied, so close to his vain now, I could fell heat radiating off of his skin.

I opened my mouth, teeth hanging lethally towards his neck. I closed the tiny distance and bit into his flesh. A hot liquid spilling out. My tongue found the warm substance and lapped it up, quenching the burning in the back of my throat. It was pure bliss.

© 2010 Emily Pazienza

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Posted 7 Years Ago

Congrats on this great work. A great beginning for a book.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Short chapter, but I liked the way you could describe this scene. Nice work!

Posted 10 Years Ago

but everything great is (:

Posted 10 Years Ago

Great chapter and great vampire scene. Very well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Awesome!! I love this, great job!! Can't wait to read more!

:)'s and

Posted 11 Years Ago

lol. Glad you guys like it. I didn't mean for it to come out creepy, but that's sorta what happened. I do like how it turned out. :)

Keep on writin!

Posted 11 Years Ago

When met with vampires you have only two choices, run for Van Helsing or the closest werewolf clan, I think it's great. Creepy, but great.

Posted 11 Years Ago

if i had met someone like the one in your vampire picture with blood dripping, i would have got scared to death and ran as far as i could...

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on February 27, 2010
Last Updated on March 2, 2010
Tags: Vampire


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