Ugly Girls

Don't judge them by their looks.

It's easy to write a poem about a beautiful girl

You get to describe her beautiful features

The things about her that make you melt and dissolve

Into an abyss of eternal happiness and beauty

The oh so fiery features that make your skin tingle

Her long thick hair that blows in the breeze

The breeze carries her scent

And you drift into a different world taking it in

The only thing you miss out in the long pages of poetry you write

Is her heart.

When it comes to a girl who is labelled as 'ugly' due to her unattractive features

It takes hours for you to write a single line

Sometimes you take your eyes off 

How long can you at someone so unattractive?

But just take a look into her eyes

The eyes that say it all

That twinkles like the stars in the night sky

That speak of the hidden pain that people like you have caused

Through her eyes, take a look at her heart

The heart that beats so loud but still you can't hear it

The heart that yearns to be loved

The heart that yearns for a little attention 

Trust me, once you take a look at that little bag of feelings

You will run out of pages to write

So once in a while, look at an 'ugly' girl in a crowd

She's the one that glows amidst them all.

Author's Note

Just something that came up in my mind...whatcha think?

Reviews

[Leigh]

...You have made a very good point with this and one we are all a bit guilty of I guess. I must admit I do get inspired by beauty wherever I see it. Beauty takes many different forms

[Lonely Islander]

That goes for me as well cuz i think its obvious lol...thank you so much:-):-):-D.

[ni ni]

This is very well written, and very well executed. I love that it was very easy to read and life like. I also agree with the message which just makes it all the better for me! Very good job!!!(:

[Lonely Islander]

Thank you so much:-):-):-D.

[Falling Leaf.]

Not every beautiful girl is ugly on the inside. Not every ugly girl is beautiful on the inside. Beauty is a complicated and poisonous thing. You're message is strong, and right, but I know some kind, caring people who are gorgeous, and some people who are nasty and venomous and quite ugly. Either way, just don't judge someone until you know them.

Well done!

[Lonely Islander]

Thank you so much for the review...you are right and i know it...i just wanted to say that we should no always look at the pretty ones..thanks again:-):-):-D.

[eglantine]

reminds me of that Shakespeare sonnet where he talks about how awful his love is--how she does not smell of roses etc.

[Lonely Islander]

im gonna check it out...it might change my thoughts about him....thanks for the review:-):-):-D.

[MrKnowAll]

Don't judge a book by it's cover. The poem is beautifully written and calls us to refrain from doing the first impressions such as looks, because perhaps you may find a world by only looking into one's eyes. And it's true!

Thanks for sharing!

[Lonely Islander]

Thank you so much for the review:-):-):-D.