Colored by Optimism

written for Tovli�s challenge -The Story/Poem Ten Write a story using all ten words, with no less and no more than ten sentences. Or, write a poem using all ten words with no more and no less than ten lines using: opened, bankrupt, future, saw, n

 

Colored by Optimism   If advancing the calendar's magic, Navy blue turning golden might seem Either part of an artist's rendition Or depression set loose in a dream. All the buildings that stand in my future Saw their start in the past of my mind. When my gate to the future is opened, The poetics of life dance once more While old bankrupt, depressing ideas Walk quite quickly right out of my door. By Sharon Miller Bolander    © 2009 Peggy Paris (All rights reserved)

Reviews

[Tovli]

such a positive little poem. loved the balance. really one of your best. tovli

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Very well done! Great use of the word list.