Peoples g. Riot's Scribe's Slab Mixtape (Vol.1, verse 2)

Peoples g. Riot's Scribe's Slab Mixtape (Vol.1, verse 2)

A Poem by Mr. Deft Diction
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I'm going to do a series of these. I've found out that I'ma little long-winded, and I must be disciplined in order to play in the big leagues. I'm doing "shorter" pieces; but the music to accompany it later will fill it out. Thank you for you

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I can be nothing but who I am/

there I go/explaining myself like you give a damn/

just last week all I had was this voice/

deep down in my diaphragm/

then the homie told me I should boast about how nice I am/

so/I finally made it/I thank you for patiently waiting/

if I believe the world is mine, then I'm here for the taking/

I ain't shakin'/and I could never see me breakin' (nah!)/

it'd be easier to feed a Muslim bacon/just like it'd be easy/

to go and smack the haters/but I'm eyein' this coupe with the paper tags/

I'ma have to get back to you later/I guess life is fair/I'm finally inhalin' the mics air/

kick a limited edition flow/the Peoples Griot is the new version of Nike air/

 

CHORUS:

Thank you for coming/grab ya seats/sit down/

peep the swagger mu'f****s/we just came to get down/

ya'll can go and pop them bottles/I'm gettin' blowed right now/

I'ma do it to death/and then I'ma show you how

 

 

© 2008 Mr. Deft Diction


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OK, I am feeling the chorus on this one, dope
'I aint shakin'/and I could never see me breakin' (Nah)
it'd be easier to feed a Muslim bacon'
Nice one, humorous
'If I believe the world is mine, then I'm here for the taking'
Like the thought here, might suggest refering back to the world...
then it's there for the taking
Nice flows, you have any this to beat on myspace or anything I'd def
check it out
J.P.O.et

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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OK, I am feeling the chorus on this one, dope
'I aint shakin'/and I could never see me breakin' (Nah)
it'd be easier to feed a Muslim bacon'
Nice one, humorous
'If I believe the world is mine, then I'm here for the taking'
Like the thought here, might suggest refering back to the world...
then it's there for the taking
Nice flows, you have any this to beat on myspace or anything I'd def
check it out
J.P.O.et

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loooook A-t-c-h-u ....

Dropping a lil' battle joint...
::: what I wouldn't give :::


Niiiiiiiiice ..."Rhyme-ology "

soooo....where s the evoc-A ???
You make me wanna do another ( open-mic) contest
yes...I think I WILL!

Blessssssssss

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good write! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the words!
I wanna hear it with the damn beat!

I love music.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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