Peoples g. Riot Scribe's Slab Mixtape (Vol.1, verse 3)

Peoples g. Riot Scribe's Slab Mixtape (Vol.1, verse 3)

A Poem by Mr. Deft Diction
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I got my mic straight/lemme get my posture correct/

The game ain't wanna let me in so/I came with my own connect/

I'm just a spitter, n*cca/I ain't bangin' and throwin' sets/

it's a lot of dudes eatin'/and you better bet that I got next/

I wanna shine a little somethin'/no Jesus piece on the neck/

I'm good with my mans/peep what he did to my checks/

I'm fresh as homegrown/I should have my own cologne/

my game is classic like a fade/I'm en fuego over 2-3 zones/

 

CHORUS:  There's a problem in the booth

(MORE FIYAH!, MORE FIYAH!)

They ain't ready for the truth

(MORE FIYAH!, MORE FIYAH!)

So whatchu want me to do?

(MORE FIYAH!, MORE FIYAH!)

Aight, here's what I'll do

(MORE FIYAH!, MORE FIYAH!)

© 2008 Mr. Deft Diction


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I wish I could hear it....
Th elyrcial flow .. transcends nicely with great punch phrases.. They hit hard quick.. sharp and clever.. shows your wit... I just need to hear you spitting it....

More Fiyah....

I think it is excellent but I feel cheated by the fact I can't hear.. It must be heard.. When you record this joint I need one of the first copies.... It left me hunger... and my ears itchin....

More Fiyah.....



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Rayah Raheem Razah
all good on the billboard
moving up the charts

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh man, this is sweet
I'm really lovin this, the chorus is decent but some of your rhymes are nice

'I'm fresh as homegrown/ I should have my own cologne/
My game is classic like a fade/ I'm en fuego over 2-3 zones/'
That's great, you a baller too I'll be checkin more

J.P.O.et

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wish I could hear it....
Th elyrcial flow .. transcends nicely with great punch phrases.. They hit hard quick.. sharp and clever.. shows your wit... I just need to hear you spitting it....

More Fiyah....

I think it is excellent but I feel cheated by the fact I can't hear.. It must be heard.. When you record this joint I need one of the first copies.... It left me hunger... and my ears itchin....

More Fiyah.....



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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