Real?

Real?

A Poem by ღCloveღ
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Is this real

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Is this real
Or is it an act
I'm so confused
HELP ME
Someone is talking
But I can't see them
What's going on
Can anyone else hear it
I didn't think so
My brain is running wild again
Somebody help me

© 2014 ღCloveღ


Author's Note

ღCloveღ
This is fictional

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you have this way of bringing people into your thoughts and world....keep it up

Posted 10 Years Ago


The character has an interesting reaction to having inner monologue. This happens to people a lot actually but of course these voices are merely reflections of ourselves in our minds. The human brain is incredible, it can even produce realistic simulations of entirely different people. But nobody gets that at first because it's so bizarre if you've never experienced it before, it really does seem like someone else is in your head. This was a cool piece and gives us something interesting to think about. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


By the way, thanks for befriending me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ღCloveღ

10 Years Ago

No problem
Powerful....Edgar Allen Poe-ish...nice

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 4, 2014
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ღCloveღ
ღCloveღ

Dixon, IL



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