I'll Sleep When I'm Dead

short poem

eyes shut, 

heart closed, 

here tomorrow? 

no one knows. 

Reviews

[John Stussy]

As short as this poem is, it's all the more profound for it. Seems to reflect the possibility of being there one moment, gone the next. Great job.

[paradise]

Short and Simple great job I love it

[Andrea]

short and sweet and very very sad, and deceptively powerful because it left me thinking about all the things that weren't said