My LOVE

... fool in love...

My love, my sun, my moon and stars...

My deep, eternal, forever more…

Yes… I have a few scars…

Old bodies sometime can get sore…

 

Old body, young heart,

What to do…

If things fall apart?

Yes… I think I love you.

 

You showed up in my darkest hour,

And you gave me your feelings…

Like the most special flower…

It so means… in such an hour.

 

Ah my beloved one…

My saviour…

My worshiped one…

My rest, after so much labor.

 

Your beauty drives me off…

Baby… yeah, I smoke and I cough…

Some specials drive me really off,

I may cry… or have a big laugh.

 

My adored one!

I didn’t gave ya a birthday present,

Wasn’t aware until this moment,

Of your most blissful presence.

 

Please forgive me, my beloved…

If you could I would give you the Universe,

If I only could move forward…

Instead of always… reverse.

 

Let us gaze into the future…

Let us not be hasty, and premature.

It’s a fault many times I have…

But I learn… I can assure.

 

You show me love?

I shower you with LOVE…

I’ll make it all walks down the park…

Cotton candy and caramel apples.

 

No words will ever be enough…

No words can describe the feeling…

If I only I could touch you…

Hug you… and… Kiss you.

Author's Note

... fools in love are fools in love and will always be so...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

People tell me. I am the romance poet. I believe you are my friend.
"No words will ever be enough…
No words can describe the feeling…
If I only I could touch you…
Hug you… and… Kiss you."
Perfect ending above for the amazing words for love.
Coyote

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Friend... you write outstanding Love poetry.

I know... cause I read quite a few of your excellent works.

Sometimes... when I fall in love... I can do the same yeah...

The "pen" just gains a life on it's own...

And it's like my soul or heart are writing, instead of my mind and hands.

Yes... in love... I can go all the way...

Even more so... in poetry.

I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem.

Thank you for your great review.

;)

[Lisasview]

Love is blind is what they say... but I am not sure and your poem says it all...
Wonderful, simply wonderful.
Lisa, now in Spain

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you Lisa.

I appreciate your kind words...

So glad you enjoyed the poem.

Thanks for the great review.

Blessed be!!!

;)

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome,
Lisa

[Soyam]

That's too good!!!

Sweet ending! Happy ending!

Happy to see you recovering sir.

Keep penning. :)

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you...

I really need to thank somebody...

For my quick recovery... ;)

You're the smile on my face...

I love happy endings! I do wish it so...

The Gods will tell...

And time shall reveal, for it reveals all things...

I'm so happy, you enjoyed the poem.

Really makes my heart glow.

;)