The Nullification

The Nullification

A Poem by Tomislav Petricevic
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A rap-rock song I wrote about dealing with insecurities and helping others overcome those fears.

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[Verse 1]


Tension's building up inside,

Your throat keeps getting dry,

You feel like backing out,

But you won't know until you try.


Insecurities collide,

Tracks of hope you cannot find,

Tomorrow brings respite,

But in today lies your bind.


[Chorus]


Get out, get out, get out,

You wanna get out of this shell.

Get out, get out, get out,

It's time to run from your hell.

Push the mind aside,

Swallow broken pride,

Don't let your future hold a doubt,

Now's the moment of getting out.


[Verse 2]


Pieces slowly form a whole,

Words carved into the stone,

Unleashing it all out

Means skinning to the bone.


Anxiety left behind,

Reduced to grains of dust,

Truth lighting darkest roads,

And burning all mistrust.


[Chorus]


Get out, get out, get out,

You wanna get out of this shell.

Get out, get out, get out,

It's time to run from your hell.

Push the mind aside,

Swallow broken pride,

Don't let your future hold a doubt,

Now's the moment of getting out.


[Bridge/Rap]


Get out, it's the conclusion of that story,

Keep your head up even if you didn't win the glory,

I'm sorry, I know the battle has been gory,

But this time around there's no ending as the quarry.

You are the winner, despite what world may think,

Pull the sleeve of those who grieve and do not let them sink,

It's the brink, destruction, the Earth near its end,

But only for those whose look shows entering the realm of pretend.

Get out!


[Chorus]


Get out, get out, get out,

You wanna get out of this shell.

Get out, get out, get out,

It's time to run from your hell.

Push the mind aside,

Swallow broken pride,

Don't let your future hold a doubt,

Now's the moment of getting out.

© 2012 Tomislav Petricevic


Author's Note

Tomislav Petricevic
I hope you have enjoyed reading this as much as I have enjoyed writing it. Those lines just came to me, so I spent the last hour or so putting it all together, and the result is this! :D
Anyways, people usually ask you to be nice when reviewing some of their stuff they particularly like, but I won't do that - I want you to be fully honest with me and tell me if you think it sucks or something. No hard feelings.
Thank you!
P.S. I think this should be in the "lyrics" genre, since this is a song, but I still put it into "poetry" xD

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I love this :) If you made this into a song i'd buy it(: I think maybe some of this should be screaming :3 Just some....(: That'd be great xD

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Incredible! Nice job

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It looks good, I really liked it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Add music to it, and it will be famous!
I love the rap and the chorus part especially.
I was singing along, as it went..so yeah, great read!

Posted 8 Years Ago


good read and i love your diction

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A touching piece that leads a very constructive view for the reader, well done, good read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is new for me but i liked it of course it was good imma have that stuck in my head watch just watch

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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wow, i certainly love the chorus part it gives out a sense of positivism and freedom.
i cant give any bad or harsh comments because its really good. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow awesome song ..well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tomislav Petricevic
Tomislav Petricevic

Slavonski Brod, Slavonija, Croatia



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