Motionless

All this media and stuff telling us what to do....what will we turn into?

Souls ripped apart now,

Motionless husks standing still,

Endlessly brainwashed.

Author's Note

The first traditional haiku I've ever written.

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

these days with all this media it's hard not to get sucked in and join the rest of the sheep with no mind of your own. we become empty shells of what we once were.

[Autumn]

Great choice and use of words in a very short poem. Good work!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Classic.

[jennifer little]

wonderful and short poetry great job keep up the good work and well writin thanks for sharing with me

[Tomislav Petricevic]

No, I've never even heard of it XD

[xSamilynnx]

really good i like it :D brainwashed is an awsome word o.o :D :P

[Angelic Surrender]

True. We need the message this sends. We have to get off our butts and live our lives the waty we want to live them. Not the way the screens tell us to. Great write.