The Greatest Struggle
A Poem by
Tomislav Petricevic
Another haiku incoming, this time morale-inspired one.
Angelic morale,
A triumph over
darkness' grasp;
They cannot
break us.
© 2012 Tomislav Petricevic
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"darkness' grasp" do you need an s after the apostrophe? I am not very sure on that... (i think you don't)
Anyways, an amazing work. I had a little trouble with the word "triumph" didn't understand it first, but I think I got it after a second look.
Good job, and keep writing.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Yes! I love the deeper meaning this poem gives me!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Yes! I love the deeper meaning this poem gives me!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Again, perfectly simple.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Again, perfectly simple.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
the power of the last line, i feel, ties together the haiku. the line in the sand, but etched in stone instead. It give something more than hope, it gives resolution.
Posted 12 Years Ago
the power of the last line, i feel, ties together the haiku. the line in the sand, but etched in stone instead. It give something more than hope, it gives resolution.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Very true--that one hope can inspire everything that's ever been written in this world. :) [I like how you used "darkness' grasp"; that's proper English. A lot of readers of our times have forgotten proper grammar.]
Posted 12 Years Ago
Very true--that one hope can inspire everything that's ever been written in this world. :) [I like how you used "darkness' grasp"; that's proper English. A lot of readers of our times have forgotten proper grammar.]
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Very good write! Your haiku's are awesome
Posted 12 Years Ago
Very good write! Your haiku's are awesome
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Haiku, nice =) I really like this one. I personally find it hard to get very emotional with this form of writing, but you've done a wonderful job
Posted 12 Years Ago
Haiku, nice =) I really like this one. I personally find it hard to get very emotional with this form of writing, but you've done a wonderful job
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Deep :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Deep :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
"darkness' grasp" do you need an s after the apostrophe? I am not very sure on that... (i think you don't)
Anyways, an amazing work. I had a little trouble with the word "triumph" didn't understand it first, but I think I got it after a second look.
Good job, and keep writing.
Posted 12 Years Ago
"darkness' grasp" do you need an s after the apostrophe? I am not very sure on that... (i think you don't)
Anyways, an amazing work. I had a little trouble with the word "triumph" didn't understand it first, but I think I got it after a second look.
Good job, and keep writing.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
it reminds me a quotation
" a small light can tear the wide darkness"
I love it.... =D
Posted 12 Years Ago
it reminds me a quotation
" a small light can tear the wide darkness"
I love it.... =D
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Tomislav Petricevic Slavonski Brod, Slavonija, Croatia
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