Unbound

A willpower & spirit oriented haiku.

Bodies shattered,

An apparent loss at sight,

But spirits - unbound!

Reviews

[Holly Soques]

Interesting little piece, this one... the message is quite intriguing, I thought, because most times it is precisely that which initially causes us physical discomfort or even pain that goes on to bring about change for the better.
Sometimes we just get so wrapped up in our day to day existence that we forget what is truly important. Isn't there that saying that we get so busy in life that we forget to actually live?

[Buniheart]

straight to the point,
and i love it!

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Very cool!

[Michael X]

because mind and body are seperate at the subconscious level,
seperation is the moment the attainment of spiritual knowledge
frees a person from the cycle of rebirth, unbound, such is value
of haiku, nature, balance and harmony. insightfully great work ^_^

[Rosallia]

This is awesome =) It's super short, sure, but it's really good

[Angelic Surrender]

This is great :) You're really good at haikus

[Simmirose]

I love the message and simpleness of the poem. clever way of putting it. great read!

[Aravind]

Cleverly done ! Another one of your excellent nanoskills? :P Message is deep.. I do wonder how this will turn out if you added a few more lines.. Nonetheless, it is kept simple and manages to amaze every time I read it.

[Desmund Tiny]

bodies are temporary but what Spirits are permanent ... I love it..... very meaning ful