Clouds

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee

In Haiku format .....

Clouds

Slaves for Anemoi

Sailing obediently

Salvaging moisture

@ Phillozofee 2017

© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee

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Pete	well said and beautiful. deep & powerful, sharp & biting ... Posted 6 Years Ago well said and beautiful. deep & powerful, sharp & biting ... Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annette Pisano-Higley

I stand guilty of needing to look up "Anemoi" - thank you for inciting my learning of something new and fascinating! Powerful image and words putting clouds in a new light so to speak. A lyrical, mythological theme, most beautifully penned.

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matilda 3000

Simply beautiful. I'd never considered a cloud to be obedient before, but of course the wind is the master.

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

What brilliance! Nothing more to add except admiration.

( I love clouds )

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. J. Nightingale

Great Image !! wow...

I love Haiku..... ..

Perfection !!!

Did enjoy... .........Jazzy

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jacob erin-cilberto

fantastic haiku...love the alliteration---
salvaging moisture...like old ships searching for treasure...tears are a treasure...whether for sad memories or the happy tears of joy.

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on May 17, 2017
Last Updated on May 17, 2017

Author

Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom

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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..