Being Let Down

Being Let Down

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee

Being Let Down



Walking in the rain

Is a subtle camouflage

To disguise my tears


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2019


© 2019 Phill Oz O'fee


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That fog and rain hide much, blurring our pain and what a passerby might otherwise see. Another piece of art, words and image.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The rain and tears. A needed combination my friend. Thank you Phill for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Months Ago

Many thanks for your kind review my friend ... :-)
Coyote Poetry

2 Months Ago

You are welcome Phill.
Superb senryu. Powerful and truthful with it. I cry in the shower. Walking and crying in the rain is even better. No one can tell the difference between tears and raindrops splashing down your face. Fabulous Phill.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Months Ago

Thanks Chris - a lovely review - bless you ... :-)
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Added on October 1, 2019
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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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