Being Let Down

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee

Being Let Down

Walking in the rain

Is a subtle camouflage

To disguise my tears

© 2019 Phill Oz O'fee

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R.E. Ray

That fog and rain hide much, blurring our pain and what a passerby might otherwise see. Another piece of art, words and image.

Posted 4 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

The rain and tears. A needed combination my friend. Thank you Phill for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Many thanks for your kind review my friend ... :-)

4 Years Ago

You are welcome Phill.

Chris Shaw

Superb senryu. Powerful and truthful with it. I cry in the shower. Walking and crying in the rain is even better. No one can tell the difference between tears and raindrops splashing down your face. Fabulous Phill.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Years Ago

Thanks Chris - a lovely review - bless you ... :-)

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Added on October 1, 2019
Last Updated on October 1, 2019

Author

Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom

About

I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..