Ice Cubes

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee

At the end of the day.....

Ice Cubes

Splash chuck in my drink

Cools the distillation mix

Nought else is needed

© 2020 Phill Oz O'fee

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barleygirl

I've never been that crazy about ice cubes myself . . . don't even use ice trays in my freezer -- ever! But I do love how the iconic "clink" can make all the difference in a mixed drink under the right lights! You've created a familiar sensation in so few words! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Erudite

Driveling spolder typed with nonchalant fingers owned by vacant hands

Posted 3 Years Ago

barleygirl

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

fattycbreezy52

This puts me in a daze. Damn!
Very well-written!

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jimmy Yetts

Intoxicating senryu.
(Chuck or chunk?)
Either way, great imagery in your minimal and tasteful mixology.
Enjoyed.

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

That was fun Phill. I heard those ice cubes splash into that fiery drink. Nothing like a few rocks to take the fire out of the whisky. See what a wimp I am :)

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Ha ha ha ... thanks Chris ... cheers, for the comments and review my friend ... :-)

3 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on October 8, 2020
Last Updated on October 8, 2020

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Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom

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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..