She Paints My World

Revamp of an old write (brought up to date) … hope everyone likes the new look - :-)

She Paints My World

My blank empty colourless canvas
Presented before her contemplation

Was securely placed upon an easel

Of creative stimulating impulse urges

And oh so gently like fine sable hairs
Brushstrokes like rainbow sunbeams

Upon my stretched receptive surface

Begin to passion paint quintessence

Artistic fingers of adoring experience

Stir fervour primers of delicate delights

With compassionate dabbing affection

Spread layer hues of pastel pleasures

Across this eager submissive recipient

Lay outlines of your feminine reflections

Love’s pallet boosting the finest pigments

Mixed with sensual spectrum imagination

Appling diffusion with each subtle stroke

Blends an abstract oneness of adoration

In myriad colours of expressive desire

Bringing my depiction closer to completion

Over viewing her adore art clearly reveals

The exquisiteness of love’s ability to awe

And the final act of artiste intimate touch

Was to engrave her name across my heart

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[Helen Woodward]

Beautiful wording as always, I'm sure you were born into the wrong century. This speaks of the kind of love between Barret/Browning...now there's a story for you! Don't get me started...
The pallette has had a good workout here ( is safely PLACED upon) Little typo there and glad to be able to help! HAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved the softness of this...
Helen...

[Ardra]

The exquisiteness of love’s ability to awe
And the final act of artiste intimate touch
Was to engrave her name across my heart

mmmm :) love these lines....
and its a very good writing...

[danielle.]

I really appreciate how you have blended love and intimacy into one and the same and the metaphor of artist and canvas. I think this is really beautiful honoring of one’s lover.

[Lydia Shutter]

Filled with sensuality, desire, and romance. The imagery is so lovely. Great poem of love. Lydi**

[Stella Armour]

An artist of both word and canvas, love this Phill, a certain strength of purpose come through and the last line ... your signature to the work was stunning !

[Phill Oz O'fee]

An update; going back over my earlier writes to leave or revamp … :-)

[Ladysue]

Stunning...I adore the title and this piece...just beautiful and romantic...

[T]

This poem is absoluely exquisite, Phill ... Beautifully written ... hugs

[Carole]

Phill, this is exquisite. Your beautiful choice of words paints a breath taking picture of your colorful relationship...I am blessed to have read this today! Thank you, my friend! Carole

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Nice and surreal! It's seems so soothing in my mind and I really like the romance of this piece. This is a very beautiful poem I must say; your style is very creative and in this poem, it was very warm and colorful. ^^ Written like a true artist. :)

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood