Dear Diary,

Dear Diary,
I just wanted someone to talk to.
Everythings getting mad.
Moms arguing with dad
She says its all my fault.
I dont know what to do.
I need someone to talk to.
I need someone to know
Doesnt this start to show?

Dear Diary,
Things are getting worse.
I wish that I could lift this curse.
Im getting really sad.
Is Mom right, am I bad?
Dad says its all because of me
I want to know, why cant they see?
I just want to be free.
Cant they see I just want to be happy.

Dear Diary,
Im really scared now.
Somethings going to go wrong, I dont know how.
Dads going really crazy.
And no one is gonna save me.
I think this might be the end
Both of them have just gone round the bend.
Can no one hear my cries of pain?
Cant Dad see that theres nothing hell gain?

Dear Diary . . .
If only someone had listened to me
Then perhaps Id have been free.
But no one did, no one cared
I guess thats why Im now dead.
 

Reviews

[Starting Over]

That is sad and deep! I loved it and it was a powerful piece!

[Alaina]

Wow this is very deep. Writing is a great way to express your emotions. If you are really going through something like this EVER talk to someone even if it seems like the last thing you should do, just tell someone get help. But i know you, well i think your a happy random girl who hopefully isnt facing this type of situation but if you are TALK to me.
Well over all i liked the poem
-Thanx for sharing its well done.
you might want to look over some of the punctuation but great Peice!

[Anima Inspired]

An interesting idea for a poem...the "Dear Diary" entries were quite interesting. Some of the punctuation could use some work...there were quite a lot of periods put where commas should be, which makes the flow a little choppy. Still...I liked the sentiment.