Someones inspiration

Someones inspiration

A Poem by Ethan Castner
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Im sitting here at school doing my homework and this comes to mind, short and simple, but i like it. Tell me what you thing **P.S ill be writing more soon so dont forget about me!**

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I want to feel it

that instant-gratification

of someone saying to me

"You were my inspiration"


© 2010 Ethan Castner


Author's Note

Ethan Castner
**P.S ill be writing more soon so dont forget about me!**

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Thats cute! i like it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aw, this is so sweet... I really like it a lot. Sometimes I know I'd love that feeling and have had the gratitude of actually being someone's inspiration. But, for me I feel it's better to TELL someone that they're your inspiration, for I like them to know and also I like the happiness in which it grants them. Short and sweet, I like it. Farewell, mortal~

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Kes
Wouldn't that be nice...
You WERE;
Not ARE?
That's an interesting choice of tense.

Posted 10 Years Ago


at a first glance this could easily be overlooked... but when I read it again it spoke to me on so many levels... well done man!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ethan...short and sweet! Keep writing whenever you feel the words...

Posted 10 Years Ago


I want to hear that from my girlfriend SO bad!!!! But I like it, short,sweet, and to the point!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on November 8, 2010
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Ethan Castner
Ethan Castner

Gig Harbor, WA



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Hello there, My name is Ethan Castner and i like to write.....well i try to write that is. I think im pretty funny, i can tell stories for hours on end. I know my writing skills are horrible, but that.. more..

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