A Peaceful Oath

Schools never get the attention they deserve .... i guess this is an attempt .... not much but thats what came out of me .....

Once read stories are to be told of a place of peace

The circle of love entwined in satin altitudinous teal

The hand of angels awarding a timeless passing list

Benevolence was their river blue distracted ground

The umblical sunny birthing just star

Eruditions that formed a letter inscribed in minds

Telling of a forgotten secluded story placing acts of peace

Floating unrestrained birds playing song for volar ears

Forming through piles of yesterday's proficiently done assignments

Tonight you folded timid knightly marked grades

Drawing out a line of circumferenced ecliptic love

To be habituated without condition often listening in sounds

The beauty of the zoetic red beating heart

Left so much to be of fancied inspired dreams

You ponder upon white abstruse rays of emotion

As silent yawning wishes reach a seventh sky

Showering protracted rains of ancient butterfly's wisdom

To grow insidiously within before reaching out

Refusing the consent of tarred air 

The theater of flamboyant recalls

The art of peace

That must have been an Oath taken

Reviews

[Pale Moon]

I really enjoy this! :) That powerful feeling :)

[B]

Thank you for your words

[tp340]

An enjoyable read, keep it up and feel free to read any of my work.

[B]

I will ..... Thank you very much

[Amy R]

Such a great and powerful piece
I like the way you play along with words,
always turns out to be a great write.
Thank you for sharing.

[B]

Thank you Amy

[Amy R]

ur welcome

[Chase Dylan]

This is a whirlwind of syllable count and flow landscape... I am a bit awe-struck by some of these lines... Nothing to recall about this buoyant zeal of teal reality... Your word choice mirrors some of my favorite sounds... Insidiously penned...

[B]

Thank you so much
blushing here

[Chase Dylan]

D'aw, was my pleasure...!

[Rachel]

very powerful poem and excellent word choice

[B]

Thank you Rachel

[wordman]

the poem,the image and the theme of the write was right on

[B]

Thank you Wordman

[Mr.Writer]

The imagery in this piece was breathtaking with the fantastic poetry...
"Tonight you folded timid knightly marked grades
Drawing out a line of circumferenced ecliptic love"
I really enjoyed the poem :)
School is like nature as well, we need it to go on with life, and you described that very well :)
I'm proud of you

[B]

Thank you Monsieur

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)