Oh, The Pain I Feel Inside

Oh, the pain I feel inside...

When I'm sitting all alone

Oh, the pain I feel inside...

When I know I'm unknown

Oh, the pain I feel inside...

When you cast that first stone

Oh, the pain I feel inside...

The pain I know I can't hide...

Reviews

[Nico Marie]

I love the flow of your words! It's a beautiful poem that I can relate to ^.^

[Chris]

Repeating a line can have power - doing it too much takes away from the impact.

[Karmee]

This has a wonderful flow to it,
love your rhyme scheme

[Tori Jones]

Thank you!

[Tori Jones]

Please know that constructive criticism is very much appreciated...