'Left Unseen"

And then there are these three...Faith, Hope, and Love, and the greatest of these is love.

On the brink of madness

I blink to clear mine eyes.

The heart of you, looked so brand new

tis mine I did despise.

A brokenness left within

with nought a chance to heal.

Tis time they say, that heals all wounds

and mine has yet to feel.

The wonders of this world

of love and things between...

 

Have left the eyes and heart of mine

with beauty left unseen.

Night.2013 

Reviews

[Written Volumes]

I believe it is an inclination of how we proceed our hearts. Sometimes, its blinded by the things we are never left to see. Meaning, when secrets are revealed, and the heart cannot believe what it is seeing, it just wants to "vanish" into thin air.

Very nicely written!

[Night]

...thank you very much.=)

[Written Volumes]

You're welcome!

[Asilem]

i never cease to be amazed by the beauty that is us. Great poem. :)

[Night]

Thank you kindly my friend...=)

[Salar Majak]

wow
love, hope and faith :) three things that we cannot live with out. great poem

[Night]

Hi my friend, yes, yes, and yes...lol. Thank you so much...=)

[Salar Majak]

you are very welcome!

[Dalia]

wow,words here gave a powerful reaction
Perfect rhyming as well
very well-written

[Night]

Thank you kindly my friend...=)

[Dalia]

Welcome, I enjoy your writings honestly ..

[KAOlmsted]

Hope springs eternal...with faith you find love. Excellent write.

[Night]

...thanks kimmer...=)

[KAOlmsted]

But of course ;-)

[Night]

......=)

[Frieda P]

A bit of melancholy which I don't see much of that side of you...always hopeful as is your ending. Beatifically pen'd my friend!

[Night]

Thank you my friend...=)

[Frieda P]

Always my pleasure, now SMILE. ;-D

[Night]

...now that made me smile...thank you.=)

[Frieda P]

:-D xo

[LA Lorena]

I think this most touching, and one of your best.

[Night]

Thank you Lorena...=)

[DIVYA]

A bit of wry pessimism here. The subject need not be downcast...sometimes a brand new heart is all it takes to heal the wounds in a broken, torn one.
Lets keep the hopes alive!

You wrote touchingly.

[Night]

...thank you my friend.=)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Beautiful and full of meaning.

[Night]

...thank you my friend.=)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Time's The Bond]

WONDERFUL loved it

[Night]

wickedly nice to see you my friend....thank you kindly...=)