My Song

A nice short poem

Here it is, here goes my song

Trying to do right, yet i do wrong

Living my life, living not to care

Falling into traps, gasping for air

So many leaders, who do i follow? 

So many foods, which do i swallow?

The best thing, well, the best thing is freedom

So when we read poems can't we just read em

Seeing to that, all's figured out 

Simple living is what life's all about!

Author's Note

A poem about life

Reviews

[Hush Hush]

I really like it, I love the simplicity :D

[Coyote Poetry]

The wisdom is amazing. Freedom is not appreciate till it is gone. Life can be a hard journey. Or we face life with a positive outlook and face the world without fear of failure. I like the ending. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Goodbye]

Love the idea behind simplicity, as well as the idea of letting yourself be led by God, and getting your "self" out of the way.

[KAREN]

Amen! Live life to the fullest! Be yourself!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

FANTASTIC WRITING!!!

[drops of jupiter♥]

i love this:))

[kij143]

Wow! I loved that. Your a great writer, I must remember to subscribe to you. Good job keep it up(:

[StacyPerry]

We shall be the leader and not the sheep my dear......yet life changes us and creates obstacles within so many things. Nice write

[nono]

Very nice, life is like a musical. Drama, comedy, bad, good, the unexplainable, and whatever else. Very nice. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more from you!

[Laureeann]

I love this! It's so honest, and straight foreward! This rocks