My Song

My Song

A Poem by RIch Hilliard
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A nice short poem

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Here it is, here goes my song
Trying to do right, yet i do wrong

Living my life, living not to care
Falling into traps, gasping for air

So many leaders, who do i follow? 
So many foods, which do i swallow?

The best thing, well, the best thing is freedom
So when we read poems can't we just read em

Seeing to that, all's figured out 
Simple living is what life's all about!

© 2010 RIch Hilliard


Author's Note

RIch Hilliard
A poem about life

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I really like it, I love the simplicity :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


The wisdom is amazing. Freedom is not appreciate till it is gone. Life can be a hard journey. Or we face life with a positive outlook and face the world without fear of failure. I like the ending. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
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Posted 13 Years Ago


Love the idea behind simplicity, as well as the idea of letting yourself be led by God, and getting your "self" out of the way.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Amen! Live life to the fullest! Be yourself!

Posted 13 Years Ago


FANTASTIC WRITING!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i love this:))

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow! I loved that. Your a great writer, I must remember to subscribe to you. Good job keep it up(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


We shall be the leader and not the sheep my dear......yet life changes us and creates obstacles within so many things. Nice write

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice, life is like a musical. Drama, comedy, bad, good, the unexplainable, and whatever else. Very nice. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more from you!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this! It's so honest, and straight foreward! This rocks

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 16, 2010
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RIch Hilliard
RIch Hilliard

Pittsburgh, PA



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