~Intruder~

Sound the alarm you are gettting to close to my heart...

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Intruder

You entered my heart unannounced
And turned my world upside down
Leaving me only guessing
Why didn�t the alarm go off in my head?
Or at least in my heart?
I start thinking to myself
�This must be right because
There�s nothing to tell me it�s wrong��
My heart�s been torn, broken, and scarred
Ripped out by the last person that I let in
I pledged to never let anyone in again.
Then you came along�
You changed my mind
With your sincere words
And genuine touch�
You made me feel safe
I find myself falling for you
Escaping from misery
While you introduce me to paradise
You unlock all of my doors
And tear down old barriers
With your bare hands.
You help me rebuild
The ruins inside of me�
I let you break into my heart
Because I know
This is where you belong�

Reviews

[Reuben Porter]

I like this poem, it tells us that we are all vulnerable and that it is possible for someone to break into our lives. Once into our lives it is possible for them to help us rebuild ourselves from a pain we have, or they can either make it worse. Very good poem, thanks for the read request, I apologize for taking so long to get to it.

[Blue Bard]

You help me rebuild the ruins inside of me...Lovely and descriptive, a true look at being vulnerable, the risks and rewards.

[forfila]

wow what a sweet poem and letter, I love it, much adored..
It is always hard to rebuild a heart after it is broken, and especially hard to ever love again. But you seem to have done both here, and it is beautiful..

Love
Me

[Forest Green]

Wonderful poem...nice metaphor...disturbing yet poignant.

Very good work!

Thanks for the send.

Daniel

[AK]

Whoa ho! Very, very passionate. Just be careful... oh nevermind. It's too late for that : >)

[Phil & Bren's Colla..]

Very well written. So romantic. I love it. You have done a wonderfully job penning this poem. Great write.

aww shantellee is in love. this is a very beautiful poem and i bet i know who it is about