Togetherness

Ensemble of hues

Greyness to blues

Crashing waves burst

Unquenchable thirst

 

Powerful forceful surges

Raging turbulent urges

Lingering wet kisses

Soft tender caresses

 

Ambrosia sweet divine

Shivers down spine

A paradisaical innocence

Captures the essence

Author's Note

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Romantic, bursting with love, crashing like waves of the sea. You paint beautiful pics in our minds.

[Sami Khalil]

"Crashing waves burst

Unquenchable thirst"

[Sami Khalil]

"Lingering wet kisses

Soft tender caresses



Ambrosia sweet divine

Shivers down spine"

[Buddhistboy73]

Some fine words and rhyming schemes here YB.....haven't been on here for a while, and good to see you are still writing. This is sensual and I love the match of words to picture.....
Favourite lines = ensemble of hues and ambrosia sweet divine......
BB

[Jibey]

Lingering wet kisses would be so sensational... Where would you like them?

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Ah another Hopeless romantic

you play with your words as I do
beautifully painted like a true romantic Poet!


Nicely done I loved this was stunning and I love
the ocean BTW and it made this very romantic also.



God bless. Benita

[Poet]

You have a romantic side to you that comes out in this. I envy your thoughts and vision here.

[Don't just B, but B ama..]

Again another great piece from you letting the reader really feel the emotions. And your adding the music to your poems adds to the impact. Nice job, again.

[Godo Jobadze]

profound words and beautiful imagination are painting very romantic sense

[Alessander]

Very intense Butterfly. There was almost a release by the end. Your work usually has a compact urgency about it.