Music

Yellow Butterfly

I can't explain this feeling I get when the music starts to play...

My body starts to move in the most precarious way...

I can't explain this feeling I get of pure ecstacy that I feel

Making me so excited I could burst, oh how it makes me squeel...

Such an exhilarating feeling inside of me as I sway from side to side...

A feeling flowing deep within me, a feeling of which I can not hide...

I can't explain this feeling of how much music really means to me...

All I know is this feeling makes me feel, sexy, confident and Free!

Reviews

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music is the rhythm of the soul...lovely sentiment.

[paparapapa]

This is good and totally relatable. I love rhyming poems, so I love this. Haha. I loved how you describe the feeling when you hear music. Great write. Keep it up. ;)

[J Todd Underhill]

nice this similar to the style I would write when I first started writing you would be a natural for the sonnet form. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sonnet I think you would do well with it!

[EylonBear]

oooo this I like. it's good. I personally am a music freak. and I just love they way you described this.