Lost love Affair

Black Butterlfy

What is happening, totally spellbound

By the sheer power of a love so profound

Flashes of excitement piercing the soul

 To be in his arms again, two become whole

Overcome by emotions, out of control

 So overwhelming, no one can console

Vivid images of an enchanting love affair

Similar to that of a world movie premier

Like a star in a movie  that is very hypnotizing

 With a stage presence that is so mesmerizing

A love you have, so strong and so delightful

Wanting him by your side, that would be wishful

Acting like a love struck teenager in a trance

An affair doomed from the start, didn't stand a chance

 

Reviews

[Lion of Judah]

Mmmmmm nice subject and content. I like!!

[J. Anthony Guerrero]

Nice. I really enjoyed the lines,
"Similar to that of a world movie premier

Like a star in a movie very hypnotizing
With a stage presence so mesmerizing."

Very nice rhythm and flow.

[Sarah]

lovely, the ending is very effective...

[Hoskinsish]

Nice poem. I particularly liked the ending.

[Robert Haigh]

Ah...life is like that sometimes. You win some, you lose some. Nicely expressed poem.

[Jibey]

So our emotions carry us away and stir the imagination with visions of delight... and yet the head brings us back to reality... You captured the giddiness and the cold shower well... wishful wanting... so good to want and to wish...

[Hello, Goodbye]

Great joyful poetic expression, good job here