Crazy Love

Intensity flows

two hearts 

intoxicating

mesmerizing

haunting

pulsating

thrashing

grasping

clashing

gasping

breathing

rushing

racing

pacing

wavering

longing

needing

touching

feeling

insane

pain

like

no

other

this

tidal wave of

c

r

a

z

y

l

o

v

e

I see you,

I hear you 

I smell you

I tease you

Rushes of pure ecstasy

driving me in sane

can not contain

deep runs this pain

for I am not to blame

for this love that remains

runs deeper through my veins

keeping this heart strong to sustain 

this crazy love that will always reign

Reviews

[Karen]

I am truly amazed at your mastery with verbs! I have never seen such an array of connecting verbs that represent a single image, a single event. And then you go into rhyme and expression in such a way that leaves readers amazed and dazzled. Thank you for writing this poem and sharing it with us!

[Sami Khalil]

"I see you,

I hear you

I smell you

I tease you

Rushes of pure ecstasy

driving me in sane

can not contain

deep runs this pain"
Wow. I agree . It is a very intense write with great love and passion sentiments in it...Splendid...:)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Hey... thank you Sami... :O)

[Sami Khalil]

Hey. You are welcome...:)

[ron]

Beautiful, intense, amazing, erotic...WOW.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Ron for taking time out and reviewing my work... :O)

[ron]

Thank you so much for sharing

[Poetic Justice]

Someone's been eating the fruit of the love tree today lol powerful words :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Haha Hiya JP... lovely to have you pass by my page today... hope all is well :o)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Ooops.... typo....... you know I meant to type PJ.... :o)))

[Poetic Justice]

Lol no probs butterfly yellow!!!!

[Yellow Butterfly]

haha.... like that...hahaha so good to know your still around PJ.... :)

[Poetic Justice]

Still here :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

:o)))))))))))))))))

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Dazzzzammm!! LOL

You are one sizzling writer, Lady Butterfly! This is pure passion untamed!!!

I must say, you have a unique style in which I thoroughly enjoy reading.~xoxo~:)

[Yellow Butterfly]

haha Thanks for stopping by Robbie..... and for your lovely review.... :O)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's a pleasure, sweet woman.... I always come back because you are an awesome writer!~xoxo~:)

[Admiral Kirk]

O_O Whoa... pictures in my mind... Oh, great poem! The use of one-word lines is very effective in this poem. It really represents the, eh, you know what I mean. I liked this poem, it was exciting because of all the verbs flying at me all at once... very fast-paced... veeerrryyy interesting...

[I am Nelly]

Clever wordplay and the unusual formating increases their effectivness

[Hotwater]

That's quite effective... the use of the 'tumbling' words... it grabs the reader instantly, the journey through the poem is excellent... it shows very strong feelings... good write!
*bird*

[Jibey]

The vigorous use of verbs crashing down the page like a waterfall make this an effective poem, sonveying the uncontrollable feelings of the lover... lost in the whirl of emotion and desire