Pushed.

Pushed.

A Poem by Princess LouLou
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A girl feels pressured intoo breaking up with her boyfriend because she feels he pushed her over the edge.

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You push,

Push,

Push,

Push,

SNAP.

 

I break the bonds that i have held for many years, me and you.

I can't hold these reins for years to come, for now they can not be undone.

 

You Pushed,

Pushed,

Pushed

and pushed.

SNAP, My heart all over the floor, pieces of me and you.

I leave what remains, is all i can say is we are threw.

I loved you, i can not deny,

but for I will cry, for your were the guy that lead me on a high into the sky,

for so many years, but you

 

Pushed,

Pushed,

SNAP.

Leave or stay in my trap,

you pled, I would I scream,

But you

 

Pushed

SNAP.

I feel no pain to the trap that i left, the straps have turned on you my old friend.

For today i leave with one last kiss. For you pushed me too far,

all i can feel are scars,

Love is nomore, Hate remains.

Pains, are still around, but happiness grows with my chest,

as i feel blessed and may i suggest

That you head west as the pains in your chest protest to the new life you have led.

© 2011 Princess LouLou


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Posted 9 Years Ago


Some folk don't know when to stop pushing away and begin gathering in, the bonds though strong are never enough to bind the broken pieces of our hearts, best she ended it and left as nothing good would have grown from this empty ground. Loved the poem, keep em' coming

Posted 9 Years Ago


The repetition of the pushing gives the reader the feeling of being pushed. Full of emotion. Well done! Keep on penning!

Posted 9 Years Ago


this pain is common among many girls.........including adults that are married.... your poem has reviled a truth that many men don't see...... it's also a wonderful piece of writing, good job

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was a very powerful write here:) I love how you repeat; "You push, you push, you push" everytime I read that I felt as if someone was pushing me! Well done.
~*Evelen*~

Posted 9 Years Ago


Reads so well, love the structure and the repetition hits the message home perfectly. Great write:)

Yas

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Princess LouLou

Rochester, Kent., United Kingdom



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Hello my name is LouLou and my birthday is in September. I am ENGLISH... means i am BRITISH. GO ENLGISH. We rule. :) I am straight as a roundabout. Jokes. I am really straight. Notice I am a GIRL so d.. more..

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