World at glance

World at glance

A Poem by Pritesh
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Its to characterize the deceptive nature of our world which we all often ignore.I hope you'll like it.

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World at a glance,
seems to be a place of heavenly great,
but is not more than a human grate.

World at a glance,
seems to be full of natural treasure,
but is not more than manly leisure.

World at a glance,
seems to be full of extravagant proclaimers,
but none hears the needy which clamours.

World at glance,
seems to be full of people great and rich,
but none bothers agony of poor fighting hungry witch.

World at a glance,
seems to be full of sages and people of virtue,
but do they really preach the people with knowledge true?

World at a glance,
seems to be full of prudent vision and ambition,
but what about the embattled world with fragmented religon.

© 2012 Pritesh


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It's impressive how you've shown two opposite sides to the points made in each stanza. A reader might find that there is a cruel tone to the narrator's voice. But, the fog is actually being lifted here. The subject is connected to politics, sociology, religion and philosophy which counts as a lot. There is always an inequality resting in every society and every nation. I am glad that you have remarkable awareness of it. Though it is is of very serious content, it is enlightening and beautiful with full of morals in it. It also makes me think whether you're implying the role of the world media.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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I liked your poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


Good

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hm. I love it. It reminds me of portrait he knew. Song by kansas. Sorry if that sounds weird but music is my life so really its a compliment. I like how you view the world for what it is

Posted 8 Years Ago


Whoa.

Very elegant, yet truthful, way of veiwing the world.

Love it. (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is so true. You have an uncanny ability to lay everything out just as it is.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This just leaves me speechless WELL DONE MY FRIEND !!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow sounds beautiful my friend :) i like it... GREAT WRITE.. keep it up :)
- Kuhr Gred

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Pritesh
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