How Beautiful It Is!

How Beautiful It Is!

A Poem by Priyanshi

How beautiful is the hold of two hearts!

bespeaks, their stronghold in every war.

Breathin' in oaths, never to get ever apart

in any danger, even in a wars' shower.

 

How beautiful is the hold of two hands!

shows their intense love's race for each other.

Will remain, good friends, will set new trends

in love, dedications as if love is their Godfather.

 

How wonderful their love is! so grounded!


 

© 2018 Priyanshi


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Nice poetry my friend...........:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Beautiful flowing poem about love

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank u so much, friend.
Tender and sweet emotions pour from each line in this poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much,friend.:)
sweet emotions,love will seat you

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, friend.
I am seeing many new year messages that are asking for love & peace & understanding. I believe 2018 might be a perfect year to start changing our current world of strife & violence. Your well-written message shows me that you are in the same state of mind, as far as focusing on what's important in life, & between people! Love this uplifting point of view! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, friend:)
Beautifully penned, Priya. Woh vampire waala Novel kab aa raha market me? Lol.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Haha...usko abhi start krna hai meine...fir market ka kuch sochna padega....waise thank u and Happy .. read more
Mavericks

6 Years Ago

Same to you. =)
Indeed it is beautiful, very well expressed. I truly felt the warmth of such compassion through your words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much,Najam.
Happy New Year.
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome. Same to you.
Very suitable title, very well penned and I liked this a lot

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Farhan.

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Added on January 2, 2018
Last Updated on January 2, 2018
Tags: Love, Friendship, Pure, Forever.

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Priyanshi
Priyanshi

India



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