Scarlet Teardrops

Scarlet Teardrops

A Poem by Priyanshi

The gridlock of thoughts in mind's  cell.

Am spiritless; as lodging in a black hole.

Failing to extricate the prickling spears

nor can uncouple the unwelcome fears.

 

Rosiness of the heart is  vanishin'.

Anger is pulling off my fear's skin.

All known to him, but he reacts unknown.

Am not the one, he thinks me, as am being shown.

 

Despair eyes mapping out a highway,

Through cheeks and flushing out the dears.

 Are tears out of fear or it's rage gear?

Don't know! but it's pure tears - "scarlet drops of tears".

© 2018 Priyanshi


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I can say u written scarlet but those tears r too amazing in your verse shining each emotion fluently with magically words of flow

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much , Pooja....Glad to read the lovely review:))
Scarlet tears...that's creepy in itself. The agony in the piece came out hard and clear. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Zoe.....glad to read the lovely review:))
Zoya

6 Years Ago

Most welcome
this is a lovely Piece...........full of Life

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Hey, How r u?
Thnk u so much, for the lovely review.
Pragati Chaudhary

6 Years Ago

I am very fine dear sister
Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

great...keep smiling:)
lovely name,life is full of tears,lost dreams and love we thought to be true

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

true, sir...life is an ocean of tears.
Thnk u for the lovely review:)
I like "scarlet drops of tears" (after reading Najam's review) . . . All in all your tearful sentiments are creatively expressed and nicely original. I like the way you play with the sounds of words, in unstructured rhymes. Some of your phrases sound like shorthand & the reader may need to fill in some blanks (a good thing). Keep expressing yourself! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, for the lovely review, Ma'am.
Now, I think , I shall change the title. Sha.. read more
barleygirl

6 Years Ago

I'm not sure about your title . . . which I like just the way it is . . . I was commenting on whethe.. read more
Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

okaaay.... thank u for your suggestions ma'am.:))
Don't know! But it's pure - "Scarlet drop of tears"
Changing the last line to the one mentioned above, it sounds better don't you think?
Rosiness of the heart is vanishing is a well written line, I liked that above all.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

yeah, it sounding better....okaay, I shall change it right now...thank u so the honest review,Najam
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome.

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