Its Over!

Its Over!

A Poem by Dhara_Ditzy Kat
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A simple break-up poem

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It’s over 

Life isn’t 

The air is still free 

Breathe 

And let me breathe 

It’s over 

Life must go on

Be 

And let me be

 


© 2018 Dhara_Ditzy Kat


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Author's Note

Dhara_Ditzy Kat
Common sense 😾

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You're right ditzy, your partner may be gone. But the air isn't. Your life isn't. The only concern is "life must go one" do you mean life must go on? I'm a bit confused. Other than that this is a very inspirational poem. The meaning is blunt and obvious perfecty. Short and sweet. Nice job!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Dhara_Ditzy Kat

11 Months Ago

Awww...thank you for the kind words Sarah. I'm licking my wounds right now. Should be up on my feet .. read more
Yes like this
A matter of fact like mother would say
I like it thanks for friend request looking forward to reading your poetry

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much!

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Added on October 30, 2018
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